A Little Too Not Over You - Comments

I'm so glad that you're back! :)
And hey, I'm still in denial too. Can't believe that there is no MCR anymore :'(

Hey there! Your story was really interesting. I've never read a MCR story before, so I thought this was a great introduction to this fanfic. I really appreciated your attention to the relationship between Lacey and Bailey. It was done really well and I can tell you put a lot of thought into each of the characters. Each of the characters have very well-thought out personalities and I really appreciate that because I also tend to pay more attention to character development than anything else hahaha. Please keep up the great work and keep writing! You will definitely go far if you continue like this. :)

I don't read MCR fics or even know much about the band, but this story was nice. I like Lacey and Bailey's relationship. They're very cute together. Only one thing I'd tell you to fix: some of your punctuation. Sometimes there needs to be comma's and other times a period is needed. But it's nothing major.

Good luck! :)

Awww lol too cute

d'aaaaaaaaaaw bailey is so adorbz

All right. I read up to Chapter 21, but I'll finish the rest later. I'm here from the comment swap. This is one of the best MCR fics I've gotten through the swap, and I'm sincerely glad that I received this one. I didn't even read the prequel and i was able to figure everything out. I love the relationship between Baylie and Lacey, and how Baylie loves her father. Great work. keep it up!

Comment Swap.
So I thought that your story is really good. Well written and organized, also your characters are well described something that I can’t do with mine. I always have trouble on this. Keep up the great writing and also if you have any writing tips I would appreciate it.

Although I don't read too many stories on My Chemical Romance I found your story really good. I thought it was really well written and I can see that you've put a lot of effort into it. I'm deffinetely giving this a chance and hopefully you update soon :D

Although I don't read too many stories on My Chemical Romance I found your story really good. I thought it was really well written and I can see that you've put a lot of effort into it. I'm deffinetely giving this a chance and hopefully you update soon :D

i found your story through the comment swap thing, and i didnt read the prequel, but i starting reading this anyway, and even though i dont know what happened before, I still stuck on it. I'm only on the second chapter so far, but I can tell it's going to be great. With the exception of a few very minor spelling errors, your a great writer, and very very good at developing characters and such. Great story so far of what I read! :)

I like the way you have developed your characters, they have more than one side, I will admit I kinda wanted to puch the fictional Tom Logan in the fictional face and rip his expencive fictional clothes and stand and fictionally laugh, he really gives me the creeps. I like what you've done with the plot, you have really sat and thought it out clearly and have a direction in your head (: Good Job

'Kay, so, I'm going to start this comment now, and post it when I get kicked off the computer.
First off: Lacey's daughter's name is the same as mine, just spelled different. I'm Bailey. :) How awesome is that?! And, I already love that little girl, she's a cutie. c: I didn't read the prequel, but, I will get there. Hopefully.
Lacey is so sweet. I love her already, and I'm only on chapter two. Same with Baylie. They're both cute. And, I can't wait for Senor Iero. :D
That teacher, Tom Logan, he creeps me out. Eewwiiee.

Okay, getting booted off the computer. Goodbye, lovely story and beautiful author! I will see you soon!

This is an awesome story..i can't wait until you update again!!!

I love this (: but you should put another bump in the road of their lives o.O it would make it hella interseting to see what the would do if Lacey became pregnant once again, or something along those lines <3 keep it coming thoughh (:

aww this is soo cute! Laceys girl is soo cute! Hope you update soon!

XD. Welcome back! And the update was adorable.

this was cute! I was TeenagerFromMars before till my account got deactivated ): but I'm still following the story, glad you're back (:

aw, they're moving to Jersey. XD. awesome!

"No more Mr. Creep." I love it!

That was cute how excited she got. Update soon!!

Aww, I love it!! Completely cute(: <3