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  • Star

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    Thats was so beautiful, you made me cry :(. Thanks.
    August 2nd, 2007 at 04:12pm
  • Alice Verney

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    more please its amazing
    July 21st, 2007 at 10:25am
  • ChastaMariah

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    im crying... that was wow i cant handel that stuff that well...im soo EMO!!!
    i loved it none the less
    July 7th, 2007 at 11:25am
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    Ha ha!! Thats a horrible dream, but he'll be alive in reality....right? I mean, your not just gonna leave him there dead and have poor frankie in tears are you!! ANSWER MEEEEE!!
    July 6th, 2007 at 03:29pm
  • Carlyumz

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    oh my :(
    That gave me tears in my eyes, it was too much

    "You can’t be gone Gee, I’ve loved you for so long, you can’t be gone, you can’t.

    I collapse on your chest sobbing. Come back please just come back."

    Cry it was written really well, i loved the sheer desperation in the lines above and the inital denial.
    The only thing i didn't like is how angry frank still was towards gee, i mean i know that makes it realistic but my little heart wanted frank to say how much he loved gee.

    But that's just me, i still thought it was brilliant and probably better the way you wrote the ending, well done!
    July 5th, 2007 at 10:09pm
  • shootmyselfinthehead

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    That's so sad.
    Brava.
    July 5th, 2007 at 08:35pm
  • ChastaMariah

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    i cant bare to read on but i must!!!!!
    more. please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 1st, 2007 at 02:45am
  • HUSTLAH

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    omg.
    no.
    what's going to happen?
    This story is amazing tho.
    More. please?
    June 29th, 2007 at 11:35pm
  • gdaywolfbane

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    jealousy is a powerful emotion. and so is this story. Awesome, So continue it (If you are) cause I'll be looking out for a next part.
    June 28th, 2007 at 05:59pm
  • Carlyumz

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    ohh i thought it was a one-shot and re-read the summary, another part? Yay :)

    I like this, i like the angst in it
    June 28th, 2007 at 03:20pm
  • wrathchild.

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    No, no, no. Gerard is not going to kill himself, isn't he?
    I want update! Now! :D <3
    June 28th, 2007 at 10:39am
  • shootmyselfinthehead

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    That was really powerful....Clap
    June 27th, 2007 at 09:36pm
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