Make Me Yours - Comments

i finally was able to finish the second chapter
the phrase 'innocence is sexy' comes to mind when reading that chapter
it definatly applies there
and i can't wait for the next chapter :]

i try i try
im in the process of the third chapter

:D done with the first chapter
it was so sweet!
the ending was adorable :]

bahaha i try <3

i haven't even read it yet but i just wanted to say that the summary made me chuckle XD

jack you inspired me to write more, now help me with the next chapter? :]?
i want to change their names! I HATE THEM.

I inspired this! I totally forgot all about it xD
It's good, hon. Really good (:

honey...put more soonnn

i am seriously liking this :D

OMG
PORN!
;D

Oh man, I just found this and WOOOOW, I looove it!
I'm such a dirty freak, but that's okay, because boy, this was... YUM!
;D

I know you haven't written anymore in a while, but jeez. i want more!
:]

omg this story is SO freaking good so far! more soon?

I like it, i'm ok with a little daily dose of porn<3
please keep writting :]

hi!
i love your story!!
keep it up.. ;]

hella intense.
you're my favorite smut writer ever.

This is so beautiful.

You're obviously in such control of your characters and words that you use. Finding talent like this nowadays (and on this site ¬¬) is almost beyond impossible.

Jammy thing ^^

wow holy shit. this was intense. if begging gets more faster i'll beg. *proceeds to beg* more please?

okay okay! you begged and i delievered!
There is chapter two!
and who knew a blow job could last two pages? xD
leave me some more love?

Okay you so need to write more like REALLY soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow...that was something. Im going to subscribe and hope you write more