damn it!!! river dead??? :`( wuaaaa...i cry when i read about river is dead. they are such a sweet couple. what a true love!!! come on, dont make me wait to read the next chapter. HURRY!! heehee...
Finished reading the rest! Sorry it took so long...damn Mibba was running slow. anyway...all four chapters were amazing. This is really original so I'm really anxious for more!
I only read the first chapter since I should be getting to bed, but I did enjoy it. There were a few grammatical errors, but other than that it was perfect. Your descriptions are vivid - which makes a great story. I'll read the other chapters tomorrow when I get up. I'm looking forward to see what happens. xD