Hearts and The Heartless - Comments

  • aszafita

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    la la lal ala lala la....jeng jeng jeng...kalau mati ini macam ah, wa rela mati sekarang. hehehehe..
    July 6th, 2007 at 05:17pm
  • RyeBellamy

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    *laugh out loud*

    dush dush.... :P
    July 4th, 2007 at 04:07pm
  • aszafita

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    haiya...manyak romantik ooooo....nak kahwin! nak kahwin!
    July 4th, 2007 at 02:10pm
  • aszafita

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    i want more! i want more! i want more!
    July 3rd, 2007 at 03:19pm
  • RyeBellamy

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    oh thank you!! :D
    July 3rd, 2007 at 02:42pm
  • Smexy_Eden

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    Wow really really good!! Verry descriptive and also sad :( but verry good!!
    July 3rd, 2007 at 11:54am
  • Spaztastic

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    those were great chapters! They make me crave for more!
    July 2nd, 2007 at 07:45pm
  • aszafita

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    damn it!!! river dead??? :`( wuaaaa...i cry when i read about river is dead. they are such a sweet couple. what a true love!!! come on, dont make me wait to read the next chapter. HURRY!! heehee...
    July 2nd, 2007 at 04:49pm
  • RyeBellamy

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    :D thank you, i'll try my best, ok?
    hahahaha eh....
    July 2nd, 2007 at 02:56pm
  • Spaztastic

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    Oooo this is getting better and better. All the chapter endings makes me want to read more
    July 2nd, 2007 at 12:20am
  • RyeBellamy

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    thanks u guys!!! u don't know how much i appreciate comments!!!!
    July 1st, 2007 at 04:24pm
  • aszafita

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    great.!!! i reall want to know what happen next. i cant wait for the next chapter. come on, make the next chapter as soon as possible. hehehe...
    July 1st, 2007 at 04:21pm
  • Spaztastic

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    Finished reading the rest! Sorry it took so long...damn Mibba was running slow.
    anyway...all four chapters were amazing. This is really original so I'm really anxious for more!
    June 29th, 2007 at 07:23am
  • Bella-

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    Wow...this is REALLY good.

    More when you can...PLEASEE!!!
    June 28th, 2007 at 09:14am
  • Spaztastic

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    I only read the first chapter since I should be getting to bed, but I did enjoy it. There were a few grammatical errors, but other than that it was perfect. Your descriptions are vivid - which makes a great story.
    I'll read the other chapters tomorrow when I get up. I'm looking forward to see what happens.
    xD
    June 28th, 2007 at 08:48am
  • username89474389572

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    Its really sweet..more please! :mrgreen:
    June 28th, 2007 at 08:26am