Just like Miss.CorrCorr said, we're here for you Despite that, thank you for updating, really, a big thank you That you still took your time to write this, I feel honored that you're still writing this Hopefully Rev will be able to get Maria to Red on time Her change seems to be coming over her fast I'm really looking forward for more Hope you update soon :)
Holy shit! I'm so sorry. :( I'm sure you've already heard this a thousand times, but I really feel for you. Besides that, I loved the update. It was really intense and...I just loved it.
Stay strong dear, we're all here for you. I'm honored that with all that's going on you're still going to write this story. I'll stick with you no matter how long you're gone
fifteen: I'm back to commenting this. The descriptions were still awesome and still loving this more and more. Wondering what's going to happen next? Will Maria be able to leave with Rev? Will she get there on time? Can't wait to read the next chapter and find out.
Damn I just got so into this story and there's no more updates :( I cant wait for the next one! I'm praying that Rev gets her in time, and that Red makes it, and that Gerard falls off a cliff....
hey i just got caught up with the story. have to say its really good, but to give a lil con-crit, i think you really need to go back and edit some of it, b/c there are some spelling errors that are glaringly obvious and make it hard to focus on the story. Not to be mean or anything, just pointing it out for you. =] But other than that, this is a really great story. I took mythology last year in high school, & i fell in love with LRRH again when we did analysis on several of the many versions of it. Your version is a great take on it, i think, especially the last chapter you posted where Syn, as "the wolf" decided to strip and get in bed with Red. (lol that sounds bad but you know what i mean!) anyways, i just love how you made it the complete opposite of the actual story!
Oh my god, Red's conditions seems quite critical And now that she's in the changin phase too, it seems even worse I really hope that Jimmy is able to get Maria from the MCR guys without being caught I wonder what's going to happen next I'm really looking forward for more Hope you update soon :)
fourteen: Excellent descriptions again. Wondering what's going to happen now? With the wolves? With the vampires? And why are the Lilths taking so long? Can't wait to read the next chapter whenever you get the chance.
thirteen: Will they be able to get her back to their home? Is she going to be alright? Excellent descriptions as always. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Despite that, thank you for updating, really, a big thank you
That you still took your time to write this, I feel honored that you're still writing this
Hopefully Rev will be able to get Maria to Red on time
Her change seems to be coming over her fast
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)