Don't Wake The Darkness - Comments

Okay. I am officially freaked out. That Mikey is creepy! I am still on edge from my nightmare last night so when he spoke to Frank I felt ill at ease. Then, when Frank realized he didn't make a key, my heart started flying. What is up with Mikey and Gerard? They must not be human. Eerie story but I love it!!!

This is great. Frankie is a fraidy cat (no offence) and Gerard is a scary creepy guy who leaves bloody kisses. Great idea and i would love to see where this story is going so please update soon. I wonder if Gerard will help Frankie with his fears or just increase them 10 fold.....UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Freaky! I like it. The weirdest thing about this story is how I found it. I just woke up from a horrible nightmare - the kind where you wake up in a cold sweat and are afraid to move for at least 10 minutes then rush to turn the light on. Anyway, I of course could not go back to sleep so I started reading and voila - your story. I look forward to more.

yayyyyy i love it!!

Wow! That's totally amazing!!
it's totally awesome that frank's so afraid of the dark that he actually needs to start preparing at 1 pm... It's brilliant!

oh my god. that was really good!!! write more soon!!!!! and hey, you stole my first comment joy. hahaha.

My new story Don't Wake The Darkness.
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