I really liked it. Bravo!
June 27th, 2010 at 10:40pm
Your descriptions are beautiful!
I really had to quote this part in particular, since I just loved the metaphors you used:
The grass became the waves of the ocean as the wind swept across its floors. The empty swing sets hauntingly swung back and forth like the pendulum of a metronome. Leaves danced among the wind as if a silent waltz took place.
Great job.
