Killing Joy - Comments

Good storyline. Your grammer could use some work (and to be honest the 39#!dj: thing that keeps popping up is very annoying.) but overall good job:)

just read this and it was amazing :D

I Loved It It Was EPIC :)
You Freakin; Rock =D

Poor Zackie

Seriously, I'm on chapter four and I can't even describe how irritated I am.
And I'm going to say this in the nicest way I know how...
Learn how to write!
This is what you wrote: “Ya, we need you’re the most beautiful dress for her, tonight is her birthday”
This is what it should be: "Yeah, we need the most beautiful dress you have for her; it's her birthday today"
Or something like that. This story has so much potential, you're writing just reallys fails. I don't know how you've gotten by without someone reporting your story, because I almost did. But I figured maybe if I just straight up tell you, it'll make the process much smoother.
Also I would like to point out that $100 would not cover even the smallest part of a wedding, nor is it a lot of money in the first place.
Instead of CAPATLIZING things try bolding them, take the gibberish &&^&$*$%#$$@$#@@!@#!@$%#&%^$%%$%^$%!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! out of the chapters. Make the story flow smoothly.
Just work on your writing skills!
I swear I'm not writing this to be a bitch, far from it. I'm trying to give you some tough constructive criticism, like we're encouraged to. So don't spaz out on me (that goes to everyone) and use what I've said productively.
You have potential, now just focus on my advice. Please?
Oh and by the way... commenting back in your story comments... is kind of awkward...

yayyyyyy!!!!!!!! i wuvvvv Caleb!!!!!!

@Eloquence.: Yes, for some reasons mibba runs like that. If I subscribed to several stories, I usually check them all though it read inactive. My email doesnt work with mibba, so I dont get any new chapter notification. Well, needless to say, I miss you. XD

@Baby_Rawr_Funky: Hahaha I smiled when I read your comment. You dont need to stress up at Nicky. There where my story goes. Hahahaha, sure she loves Caleb, as she loves Zack. X)

to everyone, who read and commented Thank you for your support until now, I dont know how could I survive without you all. Thank you. Mucho gracias. I love you all.

@Eloquence. Yes, for some reasons mibba runs like that. If I subscribed to several stories, I usually check them all though it read inactive. My email doesnt work with mibba, so I dont get any new chapter notification. Well, needless to say, I miss you. XD

@Baby_Rawr_Funky Hahaha I smiled when I read your comment. You dont need to stress up at Nicky. There where my story goes. Hahahaha, sure she loves Caleb, as she loves Zack. X)

wtf!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!! she loves Caleb she loves himmmm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! come onnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!! blahhhh zack needs 2 die!!!!!!!!!!!!! maybe their plane will crash but nicki her mom and nick will be the only survivers!!!!!!!!!!!! yay!

For a moment (months) I thought you just stopped updating...now I realized that when I looked at my subscription it said inactive...so I missed months of reading...I'm barley on chapter 63...I'm so mad at myself

Aw, I love Zack so much. He's just so caring.
Nice update. I wonder who's she gonna pick.
Can't wait for more! :cute:

omfg!!!! i think nikki flippin needs 2 realize that her and caleb belong 2gether no matter wat she does... i mean i feel rly bad 4 zack but how is he supposed 2 compete with Caleb they have a baby 2gether.... theres just no way he can.... anywho... i <3 Caleb!!!!! lol :)

its so not lame!!! its goooood!!
Awww no Poor zack! poor Caleb! Poor Nick! Poor niky!!
I love it!!

I still love the story but...... It's not getting lamer, its getting harder to understand.......I'm not sure if your English is foreign or you are young but you really need help with the grammar. That is the only thing that I don't like about the story.

I love this story it's so awsome and this was my favourite chapter so far!
I really hope you continue it is the best story i've read so far!

loveee it!! it would be cool if you updated more often though! But anyway, LOVE LOVE LOVE IT

awww poor dani! she had no idea her bf was married!
but i think i want Nicky and caleb together.

good work cha... ! well , i dont have any idea to comment but i just love the way you write this story . it seems like you have others good ability beside married with 'preman malang' huahahahhaha ..

oh my :)

xxxxxxx

omfg!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she hads the flippin baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i want her and caleb together!!!!!!!!!! maybe the baby will bring them closer!!!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i kinda feel bad 4 dani but come on they had a baby toggether!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!