And She Was Strong. - Comments

i love this story. can't wait for the next update.

I really love this. It's beautifully written and flows together so nicely. I'm really glad I found this. It's so hard to find well written stories on here; this one is brilliant.

Her mind was on fire, and she felt like she was burning up from the inside, out.

That line is gorgeous. I love it, with every fiber of my being. I, for some reason, can just see Lily bursting into flames with the happiest smile on her face.

And it seemed that saying her name even cheered him up; her name was like sunshine on his breath, and, as it slipped out, stuck to his clothing and sank into his chest.

Again, the imagery. The description. It's absolutely beautiful.

Overall, this story is amazing. The emotions and passion, they are so sad. They make me wanna cry :'( Gorgeous story. I can't wait to see even more of it. I want to know what's going to happen.

Yeh've left meh craving this story like sex, Doll. Yeh've done it. (:

I love this story. It's tremendously intense and makes you think about the character's feelings a lot, which I adore. You're a great writer. When I read your stuff it sort of gives me a calm vibe, which I adore even more! (and that rhymed! :] )

Keep up the good work, Matt & Jimmy are my favorites :)

Just started reading this (after visiting your profile when I entered your contest ;)) and I'm hooked already.

Your description of her being raped in the first chapter was well described; it almost felt like I was there, like I was living it, you know? That kind of thing is hard to come by on here - a writer who can actually make you feel like you're living the situation in the story.

I shall comment again when I read more. ^.^

*subscribes*

I loved this chapter. Even though, it got really sad to a point where I was very sympathetic towards Lily. She doesn't deserve what she's getting at all! She deserves to allow herself to be happy and comfortable with Matt, without having a second thought about Jeremy.

That fuck! I hate him! :(

More soon? I can't wait to know what happens next! I'm sort of wishing Matt finds out how Lily's life spiraled down and somehow saves her. But that's just me hoping.

ily xx

I really love this, please update soon? I can't wait to see where this is gunna go :D

I like this story a lot. It makes me wonder what matt is going to do when he finds out what's been going on. Tj

why doesn't she just end it with that prick?!

I loved this chapter, especially because it made me feel all warm inside throughout entirely reading it. (:
You're seriously such a amazing writer! & I love you for it!

Congrats, hun! Honestly, this story deserved 10 stars a long time ago.
I hope you update soon.
xx

OMg Im fucking hooked!

feed my new addiction please :)

First time reader here;
Just wanted to say that I
love this story. (:

'stay tuned, tai tubers' oh jack... hee hee. ^.^

I like this story alot! Cant wait for the update!

Loved the update ^^
And the new layout is amazing (:

I liked the update :] oh and the layout is nice too!!

I missed this story!
Thanks for the update. (:
I can't wait to read moreeeee.

x

I've been waiting for an update of this story for so long. (:
It was a good update, can't wait for things to get intense.
The Academy Is...?

Thank you to everyone who comments. You really just make me so happy. I can't tell you how much I love you.

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Awwww. It didn't seem like a fillet, it seemed like everything we've read so far build up to this. It was a great one; I loved it. Usually I wouldn't like it when things go happy but I really love that finally something goes right for her ^^ Great writting as well, as I told you many times before ^^

And sorry I didn't get to comment this earlier, but it's better late than never! ;)