Aww, that was adorable. Sometimes you just need some fluff, ha ha. I don't think you were bad at the romantic parts. They were cute. Amazing job. I love it! Keep writing!
I like it alot. Although it is mostly wrote for females, I guess I'm a bit femine. I liked it, because it has a semi-original plot, and I liked the way you put Simple Plan in the story. Post more soon, love.