Remembering Sunday - Comments

Oh my god! This was so fucking amazing. You're such a great writer. I started reading 'Can't Stay Away' 3 days ago and I finished it about half an hour ago. I love your stories! Keep up the awesome job! XD

I could be happy believing that Gerard was up there. I'd join him one day. And when that day came, it would be the happiest day of my life.

Aw.
That last line just made me wanna go and find a bunny that puked rainbows...or shit butterflies...

ANYWAYS. Excellent job on this, m'dear.
Even though I couldn't really understand what was going on at times, it was still very well written. Just the way you described the relationship between Frank and Gerard, it was...magical? Sure, let's go with that. :shifty
And the emotion that was being sent from Frank's point of view, it seemed so sad; it almost made me cry.

Despite the few grammar mistakes, this story was written beautifully.

I'm sorry that this didn't win, but I have to say that it was still amazing. Keep up the good work. :arms:

Oh wowm I loved this.

A while ago, when i first found this song, I was going to write a frerard on it. I wasn't going to go about it the way you did, but let me tell you, it was absolutly amazing what you did. That song has so much emotion and meaning and I think you were able to capture it.

You have amazing description and I love the balance between dialogue and description you have. Usually it's either loads of dialogue, or too much talking about almost nothing. But you made it perfect and .... I still want to do my one-shot Frerard on 'Remembering Sunday' But I just don't think it woud be right, or the same. Great job.

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