OMG leoni why are you such an amazing author person?! jees haha you got me wanting to write a story nowww =] your really REALLY good =] keep it uppp =] xxxx
i love it ok just something in here... You need to describe your characters alot more, i hardly know what any of em look like. You need to tell everyone how the hell Dan got there cuz i highly doubt that gee and Mikey would leave Shannnon all alone with a guy, and PLUS i don't think shannon would be stupid enough to invite a guy over to a house shes VISITING at... ok thats really all i have to say... don't be mad please i just need to know...
awwww what a whore!!!!!!! that bastard why is this so sad i want you to write other wise i will kill yopu.,.... i will come to your house while you sleep and kill you!!! hehe jsut kiddding