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  • Stay With Me:-.....

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    I hope you will update this soon, i love it! Can't wait to see what happens once they move in with one another. Ana and Alex are sooo cute together and Jack is just adorable in general. Keep up the fab work m'love xx
    October 24th, 2011 at 02:49am
  • Grade.A.Catastrophe

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    i lovee this :] I wish it wasnt on hiatus :[
    December 27th, 2010 at 06:38am
  • lizzyXdaproduca

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    updateee this pweaaase! i loveeee it!
    July 6th, 2010 at 06:35am
  • carcrashhearts.

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    So...Youshouldupdatethisonetoo. :D
    December 29th, 2009 at 03:56am
  • thnksfrthmmrs23

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    I loved it.
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    September 15th, 2009 at 12:58am
  • Kevin Jonas

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    I love Ana and Alex. They make me happy and all smiley.
    Also, I'm positive that you know how much I love this story. It amazes me.
    Love you, Dee! : )
    September 11th, 2009 at 04:49pm
  • cynicalqueen

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    Awww, you updated! I kind of cringed at the moving part because I'm moving back to my apartment tomorrow... oi. So, you had one mistake that annoyed me: you had "still" instead of "steal." Other than that, it was a lovely chapter. I wonder how Mrs. Gaskarth will deal with Ana moving in, hehe.
    September 11th, 2009 at 03:45am
  • Kevin Jonas

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    I swear, I think you should know by now how much I absolutely adore this story.
    It's one of my favourites on here.
    I'm so glad that Ana and Alex are moving in together! They're so adorable.
    I love you, Dee! (:
    May 28th, 2009 at 02:50am
  • feeling weightless;

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    I LOVE it!(:
    May 28th, 2009 at 02:36am
  • cynicalqueen

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    “Three dollars and fifty-two cents.” Jack sighed and threw the two dollars and change from his pocket onto the coffee table. “People are such cheapskates now.” He shook his head in disgust before leaning back and zoning into the TV.

    “There was this one lady that said she’d give us a twenty if we stopped singing.” I giggled and stumbled into Alex, wrapping my arms around his waist and placing my face in between his shoulder and neck. He wrapped one arm around me and then turned slightly to set his bowl down on the kitchen counter and wrap the other around me too.

    “But we didn’t!” Jack stuffed his fist in the air.

    “I would have paid you fifty just to shut up.” Rian laughed while Jack shot him a glare. “Not you though, Ana, you sound so good, I’d pay more than three dollars to hear you.” He leaned his head back against the couch to look at me in Alex’s arms upside down.

    “And fifty-two cents.” Jack coughed, not so smoothly and Maria smacked him on the back of his head.


    Haha, Rian and Jack were great in this chapter. And this chapter was the epitome of cute... seriously. Alex had me 'awww'ing by the end. I can't wait for the next chapter, =)
    May 28th, 2009 at 12:56am
  • Northern-Downpour

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    Simply amazing.
    These updates make me smile when I read them.
    Thank you for writing this. :]
    I can't wait to read what happens next. :D
    How you portray Jack is making me devolp a crush on him! He just seems so freaking adorable and huggable to the point where I just want smother him in affection. :3
    If I saw them playing acoustic for pennis I'd give them a twenty...
    May 5th, 2009 at 05:13am
  • Kevin Jonas

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    Honestly, there are not enough words to say how much I love this.
    It's absolutely amazing, all the updates are.
    I can't wait to see what happens, in this.
    I love it, and I love you, Dee! (:
    April 29th, 2009 at 02:27am
  • cynicalqueen

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    This story is too cute for words. Oh Jack and his kiddishness... XD
    April 29th, 2009 at 02:09am
  • thnksfrthmmrs23

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    i loved it
    April 29th, 2009 at 01:38am
  • h8 lyfe

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    i love it.. the story is so cute..

    you know what sucks for me? the maine and all time low are coming to toronto on may5th.. different venues but the same time.. =(
    March 27th, 2009 at 05:05pm
  • thekidsarentalright

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    loveee this
    March 26th, 2009 at 03:50am
  • feeling weightless;

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    Laser tag! ;D
    lovelovelove iit.(:
    March 26th, 2009 at 02:08am
  • Northern-Downpour

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    Awe this is love in written form!
    It pretty much made my day and it made me crave muffins...
    :3
    March 26th, 2009 at 02:00am
  • Kevin Jonas

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    Absolutely amazing, as always.
    Yay for The Maine appearing in this, later on!
    I think I'ma start with the banner making for you, again. Just like old times!
    I really do love this, no doubt about it.
    March 26th, 2009 at 01:58am
  • thnksfrthmmrs23

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    more soon please.
    :]
    March 26th, 2009 at 01:31am