Talking To The Wall - Comments

Interesting idea. I really like it.
Although, my only critique is that the layout makes it a little hard to read.
But otherwise, well done.

AHHHHHHHHH!!!! WHAT?!?!?! WHO IS THERE????????

i love it but :( she can't marry Leo!!!!

OMFG, i love ittt. its amazing, updeates sooon please :). ily xx

Ooops. :tehe: In chapter nine, you slipped up and put Leni's name from 'My Pretend Fiance' instead of Mikayla.

Ohh! This is good! I can't wait to see what happens to her... I wanna know if Ryder get's his behind kicked! :tehe: But then again... I wanna know who that was going up the stairs... Just the way he talked made me think of those secret agents with the awesome glasses, and the black outfits/suits... :brightside:

Dear God, you've never updated! I'm glad u did now, though. I can wait to read the next chapter, I love this

Aww Ryder is a cutesy pie!!!! I wuv him :)

Did i call it or what...

i wonder is shes the daughter of a mob boss....

Wow. This story has a plot that is so... different. It's amazing so far and I can't wait for the next chapter! :crazy:

I love this story! Great job. Can't wait for more!

This is the ONLY story you've ever written that I check on everyday on your story list to see if it was updated. You know I hate subscribing, unless I get fed up with just stalking them. Anyway, for this story, simplicity is obviously a strong component.

Aww, this is cute.
Short and sweet haha
When I got the emial saying you had updated
I was all
"Oh! the cute story about the wall girl!" haha
It's a promising story, good job =]

AHHH! Goosebumps! Good stuff! Goodstuff! You haven't been able to do that to me for quite some time now!

Wow people up there ^ sound like they are fancy. Ok I love the story please continue.

Interesting, not to mention entertaining. I'd like to see where this goes.

Don't get too excited now-- it's just me -_-. Bu anyway, perhaps the short description and long description was of good value to add to this piece of yours. When I read the short des., I was like, "oh-- there might be romance, or suspense or something good altogether."