Frikey - Comments

Icephoenix24 (100)

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You have some errors in the last couple. You have mikey where frank is speaking and frank where mikey is speaking.

October 25th, 2010 at 06:24pm

Just A Broken Girl (100)

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I was reading this and I realized that the 4th and 5th chapters are just like an episode from Degrassi, when Paige goes to collage and she gets stressed out and goes to her dorm and burns her exams in her trash can... I actually thought this was worth reading until the Degrassi part came into the story...

May 22nd, 2010 at 12:38pm

i_love_rolo_cookies (100)

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keep writing

July 4th, 2007 at 09:52am

i_love_rolo_cookies (100)

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It's good, but some of the dialogue's a little confusing.

July 2nd, 2007 at 12:34pm

S Chizzle x0 (100)

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keep writing! (:

July 1st, 2007 at 02:23am

i_love_rolo_cookies (100)

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This has potential, but the chapters could be longer.
Keep this coming, I wanna see where this goes.

June 30th, 2007 at 10:12pm

likeitmatters (500)

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Oh my god!!!!!! More soon! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Different!!!

June 30th, 2007 at 10:12pm

Sykess. (100)

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YESH! it took away your comment virginity *i forgot who i got that from*, buuuuuut back to the story, i love it and if u dont update soon, dont be surprised when a skinny blonde with black tips comes and kills you in ur sleep, its only me!!
much love!!

§♥♥♥sara♥♥♥§

June 30th, 2007 at 09:56pm