*sigh* I like Luke, but Kay and Elliot are totally meant for each other. Luke needs to find himself another girl (Cass) so he doesn't get heartbroken! I'm loving this story, and it's still my favorite. :]] Update soon please!
OMG -.- evil omg he should have like pressed himself on her and then elliot comes to save her :D like the knight and shinging armor ;D totally make my day lol ahhh but seriouly luke backoff... and wtf she didn't even feel anything.. BAH update :D
I've missed this story soooooo much! I even forgot how much I love Elliot! :| But Still love him all the way and can't wait till they get together... Luke really has got to go becos he'll get seriously hurt in the end anyhow. Oh... poor dude. I absolutely love this story! More pleazeee?? :)
That person on the picture better be his mother, she looks kinda old?;s It would be kinda gross :'d But I love your story <3 hahaha that must be SOOOO awkward xd hahaha xd
i feel bad for elliot. =[ and Kay Leigh is being mean. she better find a way to not bring luke to the practices because its gonna screw with Elliots playing and his behavior. and luke shouldnt have just invited himself to the practices too. so shes gonna pretty much never really just be hanging out with her friends because luke is gonna take all her time. maybe im just thinking this way cuz im team elliot =]
Loved reading Elliots POV. It reminded me that he is still one of the main characters and also how cute and likable he was! I think that even though Luke is sweet and all, Elliot shuld be more on Kay Leigh's mind and also he shuld be there when ever she needs him to show how he cares for her.
Great writing btw though...
And I'm totally still with Elliot on this one. Go Team Elliot!
that was sweet of luke to bring coffee but he should had made sure she wasnt busy 1st cuz now shes ditching her friends for him. and her and elliot just got on good terms. idk what i would have done if i was her. maybe spend like 5 min outside drinking the coffee since im sure he didnt bring enough for everyone and then they can go inside and hang with everyone or he can go home. =]
Great update, keep 'em coming! I'm addicted to this story!