You should have the story go, Emma is worried about her mom and sister, she is so worried because of her family she doesn't notice that Fred is totally trying to tell her he loves her. He keeps trying to get her alone, but everyone keeps her preoccupied and when he does ever get her alone she is crying for her family.
That's just a preview? I can't wait for a full chapter then. what I really like about this is that you really capture the feel of the war. It's not all fun and games, and it seems that you truly understand that.
i like it x] please continue! I remember this part in the book...i was in tears when Fred was killed off...can't believe she did it...just can't Anyway's... please continue!