I'm the Next Bella Swan - Comments

  • epigaea

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    One of the above comments is true. You are copying Meyers' work and I'm shocked that this story is still here. You admitted to stealing lines directly from the book. I'm going to leave this as a warning, but I will report this story if necessary.
    January 25th, 2010 at 12:30am
  • nalajess

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    i like it, and it doesn't seem like a spin off so much as original. :)
    March 24th, 2009 at 02:24am
  • Back Jarakat

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    Okay, after reading all that you wrote, it seems like your just feeding off Meyer's book. Basically the same things happened in New Moon, as they're happening in your story. Sure, yeah, Jasper attacked Bella, not Edward, and Bella went to Jacob, not Jacob going to Bella (Daniel being what I assumed was a Jacob) Yeah I get that that's what the story is basically supposed to be, but come on, we've all read Twilight, and the series, and we don't need spin-offs, FanFics maybe, but this isn't a FanFic, it's a copy. Just my opinion, please don't get all defensive.
    March 17th, 2009 at 11:56pm
  • rainandsunshine

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    I like this story, I'd like to see where it go's. =]
    Update soon please. =]
    March 15th, 2009 at 05:12am
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    I like this, and justtttt because I wanna see where it goes, I'm gonna subscribe and I'd think it would be cool if you updated.
    March 15th, 2009 at 01:39am