My Arranged Marriage - Comments

No you need to continue with this story or else...well idk I'm not a violent person....but continue it anyway!!! <3

I love the story. I'm afraid I don't know what beta is either or I would tell you. Wish I could help but I love the story.

i really like this story!! :]
so is Juli not really her sister or something?

i know! i can't think of anything else to write...sowry! :/

that was short!

i love it!

i love this story, like i started reading it and now im depressed that i caught up since now i have to wait for the update :(
but i cant wait to see what happens next, update soon :D

Love it so far please update soon <3

You said you keep getting reported? I think it could be that you haven't properly capitalized your title.
[eg: The Dog Who Couldn't Dance] Every word should have a capital letter. And "principals" should have a apostrophe.

Bethanyblueberry: Yes! Please Help me!
WolfgangPride:I can't help it... i'm sorry. And this is gonna sound really stupid but how do you write in paragraphs? :S

Also, I get reported all the time on my story b/c they say that I don't write in paragraphs ,which I can't control, when I write on mobile.

I love this story to death and you have so much potential but try to stay from using 'I' so much at the beginning of your sentences. Honestly, this story is amazing though. Keep up the fantastic work!

The reason you keep getting reported could be because you have quite a few grammatical mistakes in your early chapters. (If you want, I'll be willing to beta some of your chapters to help).

a long lost twin sister? really? woowwwww. never would've thought of that.

damn!!
did not see that one coming!!
please update soon!!
XD
i loves the new chaps!!
lawlz
but please please please updates soon!!!
XD

thanks fer tellin me :) i will

Okay i think that one of the reasons you might be getting reported is that you make a lot of grammatcial errors. Go back and look through your previous chapters for the errors.

ok quick comment, steer clear from using yellow, oranges and light blue coloured words in your story x.x

yea

the stories over??