Velvet Snow - Comments

This was beautiful.... in a sad way.
Your style of writing is amazing.
i loved it.

That was so sad! </3
I cried a bit D:
I can't believe he kicked her out!
Jerk =/
But this was written very nicely. I really loved it even though it was super sad.
(:

Oh, my... D: That's so awful. She was a paying customer! What a jerk. :/ Even though it was sad, I liked it a lot. The imagery was beautiful. <3

This was amazing! The descriptions were fantastic and I loved your layout :3 Very creative.
Good job!

Holy Cows in the pasture. I cried. Big Ol' Crocodile tears. </3
This just broke my heart, man.

She has to live out on the streets and be a guy? To top it off she gets kicked out for no reason at all. ):

This was amazing, aha. All the detail and such--the name was what really caught me. :) <3

Even though it broke my heart, I love this story with all the little bits.

I cried. Good God.

She's a boy for now. T.T

And then he kicks her OUT!? COME ON!

T.T

No further words.

Dr.

This deserves about a million comments, hands down. I'll admit that, like the others, I cried at the end. It's so wonderful <3 The banner and everything about it was so lovely.
Amazing job! <3

Oh, wow.

This was amazing.

So little one shots impress me, but this one was just... God.

You're a great writer. I trust you know that, right? Because you really are.

Good God, that was amazing. I adored it. Please, keep writing, you have the most exquisite style. Hope you win!

This has to be one of the most amazing one - shot's,
I've ever read. The way you wrote, and described every detail,
Allowed me to picture the story in my mind.
All I have to say is - Wow.

Woah...
I felt like I was going to busrt into tears.
Even though the detail like the color of her coat wasn't told, I could picture it all in my head.. And I did.
It was amazing.

This is fucking awesome.
I'm serious.
It's like, woah.
I'm happy I came across this :)

I really really really like this. I definitely feel like I have serious competition in this contest. :cute:

It's just very unexpected, and very...well, centered around one thing, and without being repetitive or anything, which I love, and then I love that you're able to spend that many words on just one instance. Also, it's so unexpected to have someone who isn't like, 18 and scene as a character; it's refreshing.

And I happen to love that song by the Goo Goo Dolls.

Only thing I'd say is that "A loonie, three quarters, two dimes, a nickel, and some pennies" is actually a little more than two dollars. Just a little math error...and I'm a nitpick for that unimportant crap.

:eyes widen:

No one has commented on this?
My god.

This is beautifully written, love.
I cried at the end, I've got to admit.
I could picture every emotion and the descriptions were spot on perfect.
I'm glad I ran across your profile.

It's been a while since I've seen true talent like this on Mibba.

Absolutely beautiful.