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  • mr. owl

    mr. owl (100)

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    This was a very good one shot. (: I didn't expect you to write that from those lyrics. It surprised me. (:

    Grammar and punctuation were perfect.

    All in all, this was pretty good.

    Thank you for entering.(:
    August 19th, 2009 at 06:42am
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