Calling Carter. - Comments

I finally came on and read the rest.

The most fitting end I think!! xD Good Cara

That's quite a good ending. i agree the bad guy should die and stay dead. Is there going to be a sequel anytime soon

I loved the ending. it was so sweet. and funny.
lol, i liked the paper thing.

and I hope that the story contimues with a sequel.
awesome.

This story was incredible.
I think the ending was just perfect. ((:
The paper thing was funny.
It made me laugh. (:

:cheese: :cheese: :cheese:
It's over, and you gave me no warning?!?!?! How could you!!

Ha, just kidding. I thought the ending was really good, with the phone call tying into the title. Sometimes that can be really cliche, but you pulled it off.

One thing that bothers me is them killing Caidan. I mean, he deserved it, but like… couldn't they have just turned him in to the police? Wouldn't they find his body, or someone would notice he was missing, and then wouldn't Silah and Carter get charged with something, regardless of what he did to them? I get that it's poetic justice, but sometimes that isn't necessarily realistic.

It just bothers me. Sorry. I shouldn't question things so much, especially when it's an ending. :XD

Anyways, I really, really enjoyed reading this. I hope you write more, cause I'm going to miss this story. :mrgreen:

this story is amazing
just thought i'd coment
i've never read anything like it

That's the cutest goddamn ending in the world!
Oh and now I'm sad that it's over :grr:

Rofl, hey, your mom is right!
He always comes back at least once!

I love you for writing this! And Carter because he's adorable! Yay for carter!

Ahh! That was so amazing I almost can't believe it! I'm so relieved that caiden is FINALLY dead, but I so want more of this story! Gah!!

*smashes caidan in the face* bastard.

Oooh. took awhile but its so suspenseful!!!! I want more!

That took you a long time to update but it was a good chapter.

oh my goodness!!!!!!!! update more!!
i hope kala is alright.
grr.
stupid caidan.

*whines* Hurry up!!! ILYLABFS and BIFFLE LOVE!!

(sorry bout my mood...s.... today. I don't know whats up with me. I think its stress. . . )

good stuff¬!

mmmm suspenceful...more soon?

Update soooonnn!!!!! Like ASAP :D please
And yes. I already commented once after I read all the chapters.
Suspense is killing me!

Wow. This story is amazing. One of the best I've had the pleasure to read. And omg I'm officially hating cliffhangers! Its ridiculous in the best of ways.

Okay, I got desperate today and got an IOU on my phone just so i could read it on Vodafone Live at lunch. That was all coz you were teasing me about it, kay? I'm not that addicted to my phone... and i don't normally get that desperate... Its just... Its a good story, okay? Suspense-ful YUSSSS very much so... Ohhh I so wanna kick Caidan HARD in the balls. And then leave him hanging by his wrists by barbed wire, so he knows what his mixed up twisted ass hoel mind does to people. and then... to wipe that ugly smirk off his face (i don't even know what he looks like, but its not hard to picture it), That.... THAT would just be the icing on the cake, right there.
XD
I'm loving the whole thing!

How was I supposed to say this? That the thought of him moving again practically – no, it did – broke my heart? I didn’t want him to leave. Should it say break my heart? Good chapters u r very descripitive with ur torture like scenes

fuk man, i winced at the barbed wire, ouchies