July 24th, 2009 at 07:38am
This, could have been a lot more elaborated, in my opinion. It's a sweet and tragic story, but there is so much missing and it's hard to understand what's going on.
It's like, it starts way into the story, and it ends before it's over and I don't get it.
I love how you used the prompt though. The glassbox that Gerard was trapped in was such a beautiful metaphor for the emotions holding him back. And to have it shattered and then let the hope leak out in the end was beautiful.
Great work and good luck! :arms:
What a cool story. I feel honored I got to read it. At first I was really confusing, but eventually I caught on. You have done a wonderful job keeping the reader intriqued. My favorite part about the whole story is that so much of it is left up for your own personal interpretation.
Wonderfully written
Tay