Teach Me How to Play Baseball - Comments

I love this story! you are a really great writer!!

nice, hahaha, watch them like alread y be there to try and make everyone happier...... lol
but i think its depressing that her sister wanted her to commit suicide along with her, i mean, shes asking her sister to give up everything, everyone, to just be dead and with her, im sorry if im not being sympathetic, i think thats kinda selfish. just my opinion. but anyways, good update, please update soon!!! :]

awh, hes such a sweetheart!!! <3
hes gonna meet her parents soon i have a feeling!!!! ;] interresting!
so please update soon!!! i wanna know whats next!!!

thats terrible!!!! :O
im so sorry for her!!! :\ totally fictional, but thats okay.... but thats heartbreaking!!
please update soon with her reaction!!

DAYUMMM!!!
poor girl, her friend leaves her for kristen and then her sister dies :(

bahhahahah thats funni!!!!! cant believe that they got cuaght HAHAHA whats jackson gonna say? i wonder if he has a secret thingy 4 her lol
love it post again soon!
btw love the new name!

oh dang, i love this story, first off, then, how the hell could jackson do that?????
please tell me it was only because of the drinks.... please!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but oh well, love the quickie in the back, and of COURSE jackson is the one to interupt, but seriously,
thanks for the awesome update, but more soon!!!!

TUT TUT naughty nessa and jackson!
love it, post again as soon as ya hav time!

Oh, that was so sad....

Good update, it was very emotional.

Love it! i dun like tabby no more :(

Great update!

KTwat...I can't get over how funny that is.
:lmfao
It was short, yes, but a great update nonetheless.

I love it. Im totally confused about tabby. Is tabby going to start being best friends with kristen just cos shes famous?
Please keep going, love it

Great update!

Great update!
I love the outfits :D

Love it!! Please post again soon

Okay, I officially hate Perez Hilton.

Anyways, great update. I wonder if a catfight between Vanessa and Kristen is in the future... :lmfao

Great update :D

I'm loving this story too.

I prefer the word you used, 'man business' would have made it seem comical.

I really like this story :D
I can't wait to read more!