The Next Go Round - Comments

woah woah woah woah! i'm not even bisexual and i'm now having some very dirty thoughts about michelle...very well written, ahem...i think i'm gonna go get some fresh air now...

Well, this may be a lil' late.
but, verrrrrrrrrrrry hott.
;]

haha.

I had to read this one too lol
at first i was like "uh oh, michelle" but then i was like "Damn!!"
i think you brought a new liking of Michelle to me lol
so thanks ^_^

*jaw drops*
damn!
that was fucking sexy!

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...YUMMY!!!!!!! Lovely smutty goodness...lmao!!!

I literally smoked a cigarette after that lol. You do write some smutty goodness. I loved it! So deliciously descriptive :twisted:

That was amazing!!! Great discriptions!

would you mind giving mine a quick read?

more!!!

definatly different than anything I've ever read. Good though!!!!!

I LOVE ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!! Please more omg...now...I loved it and I wanna know how it ends...
(Ends for now anyhow...lmao!!!)

Wooow.... usualy i just want brian.... now im thinking both of them.... wow.