Nice job, darling. :arms: I thought the way you told of her family being very against her condition added to the plot. And the way she could only talk to them was endearing, but heartbreaking as well. Her parents ultimately led to her death, and the way you said that they knew this would happen was horrible. It was almost as if they didn't really care. Very well written, darling. :cute:
I thought the way you told of her family being very against her condition added to the plot. And the way she could only talk to them was endearing, but heartbreaking as well. Her parents ultimately led to her death, and the way you said that they knew this would happen was horrible. It was almost as if they didn't really care.
Very well written, darling. :cute: