Closer to Heaven With You - Comments

Actually, ignore that last bit. I forgot that I had already told you about the remake. Now I feel like a douchebag, shoving my story down your throat twice. Please disregard my forgetfulness.

I just reread this story all in one day, in practically one sitting. It's so goddamn good.

I actually for the life of me couldn't remember what the hell happened in this story, but as I got reading, I started to remember what happened. But that didn't stop me from wanting to keep reading it until the end.

I agree with fastmelodic. I've been going back and reading stories that I've already read on here because I just can't find really good stories on Mibba anymore. And when I do, the author updates like twice a year and that's it.

But anyway. This story is awesome as ever, as is the rest of your writing. I'll probably start reading They Can't Protect Me From Loving You again pretty soon. Just fair warning.

(Oh, and by the way, even though I don't like hawking my stories at people, I've been rewriting Deathbat and Crossbones as "Yo Ho Ho." The plot is basically the same, but I've been fixing some of the inconsistencies in the beginning and just doing some overall tweaking of the story to improve it. So if you're interested, then you know it's there, and if not, that's cool too.)

O_O

Ok, since I started reading this, again, 'cause a lot of the stories on Mibba are full o' bullshit, I'm gonna give you a loooonnnggg comment, 'cause I forgot to, when I read teh Epilogues. :( Sorry.

So, here, goes. :D

Epilogue:: Part One.

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Leigh sat on the sofa of the tour bus, her sketch book resting on her thighs as she leaned back into Matt’s embrace.

CUDDLLLEESS!!
<33

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ring on her left hand.

:D
-excited-

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“Babe, I’ve almost finished and I promised my boss I’d get them finished today. You know how hard he works me, he’s a slave driver.”

From the time I started reading this, I'd already knew that Leigh was a hardcore wrokaholic.
I'm so smart.
-gives herself a pat on the back for being so smart-

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“But I’m feeling generous, so you can take a five minute break.”

Zack, you're wack.
©WackyZacky.
Yeah, it's copyrighted, bitchesss!!

"You can copyright my ass. Juuussstt kidding." - Haner, Jr. <333333333

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“No, of course not, I kind of like my face and value my life.”

I'm glad you know that she can hurt you. Baaaddd.

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I wanted her to rest up for tomorrow.

Matt, you wouldn't be able to keep your damn hands off of her, if you two "rested."
XD

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Matt: “I love you.”
Leigh: “Love you too babe.”

O_O
OMFG, I can feel the love! <33

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She felt that she’d barely had her eyes closed for five minutes when Matt came to wake her up once they’d arrived at the hotel.

I hate when that happens: you're sleeping and it's dark out and then you wake up and it's all day and shit and you're going, "...the fuck? I only closed my eyes for a sec," but really its been like houurrs.
:)

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“Sorry baby, you go back to sleep.”

I actually thought it was time.
O_O

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Matt definitely wanted kids, there was no doubt in her mind about that, but was now the right time for them?

YES, YES, YEESSSS, it's time, just DO it.
In the words of the legendary Zacky Vengeance, "Do it."
Now, you know what he meant, when he said that in the Intros!!
:D
Matt's stupid, he didn't realize that. :P

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Were they two faint pink lines she could see? Or were her eyes playing tricks?

-throws confetti as she dances-

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With clenched teeth she threw the test into the trash can beside the counter. Thankfully there were two tests in the pack so she would be able to take another test in the morning when it was supposed to be the best time anyway. She put the second test back in her wash bag and headed back into the bedroom.

AHHHHHHH!! You're preggo, I know it; I have a feeling.
And my "feeling's" are NEVER wrong, with this story!
So, I'm probably right...yet, AGAIN!
WOOHOO!

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“I doubt it, now, how tired are you?” she asked with a smirk playing at her lips as she lowered her hands to his belt. Matt raised his eyebrows with a smirk before his hands slipped down her body, scooping her up in his arms and carrying her to bed.

YAY, Leatt Sex. :P

Of-fucking-course it's gonne be in TWO parts; we GOTTA find out if she's preggo-a-go-go!
:)

Epilogue:: Part Two.

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“Good. You look absolutely stunning by the way, I hope he realised just how lucky he is.”

VERY, VERY, VEERRRYY lucky. :D

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You belong together

-looks around, nervously-
:)
-starts whistling You Belong With Me-

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It was actually Zacky’s idea

Of course it was ZACKY'S idea; Zacky's sometime very smart. :D

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Despite the short distance, walking towards Matt seemed to take forever.

AWE!
I find that adorable; shut up! :)

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Their eyes never parted through the entire ceremony; through the vows, the giving of rings, Matt stared smiling at Leigh as she stared back into his, their fingers entwined.

There are SO many songs runnin' wild in my head, right now.
:D

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“I love you Mrs Sanders.”

And they lived happily ever after...
But we still need to know about the baybay! :D

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“I’m pregnant.”

Gah, IknewitIknewitIknewit!!
-dances-
I'M RIGHT!

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“I’m going to be a father?” he asked.

He BETTER NOT FLIP!
>=[

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“I’m telling you, they’ve snuck off to have rampant newly wed sex.”

Yeah, Zack, that's all you think every time any couple stays away from your suspicous eyes.
:P

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“Ok, well, you all know that I’ve been in love with this beautiful, sexy amazing woman for more years than I can remember, even before she loved me. I’ve been lucky enough to have her fall in love with me, not only once, but twice, which I’m not going to dwell on but we all know about. She’s been my life for the past six years, I love her more than anyone could ever imagine and I’m looking forward to living the rest of my life with her by my side, to grow old with her. Leigh, I love you so much and today you’ve made me the happiest man on earth.” Matt said, turning to cup Leigh’s face in his hands as he gently and slowly brought his lips to her. There was a round of applause and Brian stood up.

AWWWEEEE, I FUCKING LOVE THE SPEECHES!!!
They're my favorite part of a wedding. :D
And Matt, that was adorrraaabbllee! :)

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“Ok, so traditionally, the father of the bride also does a speech, but as we all know none of our families are here today so I guess as Leigh’s brother it’s my place to give the speech. Leigh, you know how much you mean to not only me, but to everyone sat around this table, and seeing you happy makes me happy. Matt, I’ve known you most of my life and I know that the two of you will be happy together. But as Leigh’s brother, I’m going to have to give you one final warning….hurt her and I’ll hurt you.” Brian said, turning to point his finger warningly in Matt’s direction.

AWWWEEEE!!
Count on Brian to give the mushy speech; love him. <3333333

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“Sorry sis, but it’s just a friendly warning.”

BAHAHAHAAHA!
Friendly. XD

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“Ok, I guess it’s now my turn to do a speech as the best man.” He began. “It’s been blatantly obvious for well over six years now that these two were made for each other and it was only going to be a matter of time before they decided to get married and show the world their commitment to each other. They belong together. They’re perfect for each other. So I want you to all raise your glasses in a toast to the new Mr and Mrs Sanders.” Jimmy said as he raised his glass. There was a clinking of glasses as everyone around the table joined in with the toast, Leigh barely sipping at her champagne.

The backgrpound music shoulda just been You Belong With Me.
XD
But, BTW, Jimmay, that was awwesssoommee! :D

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“Oh my god seriously?” Leana yelled interrupting him.

“That’s great news guys, congratulations.” Ali added with a wide smile.

“Way to go dude.” Zack said leaning over to shake Matt’s hand.

Ahahaha, surprise, surprise! XD

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“You knocked up my sister?” Brian growled.

“My wife dude.” Matt replied with a smirk.

“She wasn’t when you knocked her up, and she’s still my sister.” He retorted.

“Bri, knock it off.” Leigh said swatting his arm with a smile as a smirk appeared on Brian’s lips.

“Congratulations sis.” He replied pulling her into a hug. “Oh my god I’m gonna be an uncle” he added with realisation, his eyes widening.

How bipolar can ya get?
"Grr, I'mma kill you; you got her preggo.Nevermind. YAY, I'm gonna be an uncle."
XD

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“So are you; I’ll take that.” He replied grabbing the glass of champagne from in front of her and knocked it down his throat. “And I’m gonna get you an orange juice.” He added getting up from the table.

So sweet. -cute smiley-

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“I’m planning on asking Ali to marry me.” he replied blushing.

HAHAHA!
Brian's following in his sister's step and doing what he feels!
I'm proud of you, BriBear!
:D

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“Well at least she hasn’t tried to kill you.”

BAHAHAAHAHAHA!
I'm NEVER gonna forget the Michelle shit; like, how psycho can ya get, trying to run someone over.
:P
Suck my dick, Michelle.
O_O
Nevermind, she's actually do it.
>.<

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“I wouldn’t care if they did.” He replied with a smirk as he took hold of her hand and led her out of the bar and towards the elevators.

Oh, yeah, just fuck in th elevators. XD

LOVED IT!! I'm sad to see it go, but it was a GREAT story, nonetheless. :)
AWWEE, I got a mention; I love you and this story. :D

I'll be reading Dirty Little Girl, now. :) And hopefully comment. :D

i love it!!!!!!!!!! it would be amazing for u to make a sequel just to let you know ;-)

So I know it's like, been over, but I just found this and read it. Amazing.

I absolutely loved this story!!! That was a perfect ending, my dear!

Love ya!

aww this was such a good story. i'm sad to see it finished but the ending was sooo nice

Nooooo!!!
It can't be over!!
Lol, anyways that WAS SUCH AN AWESOME STORY, AND I LOVED IT SO FUCKING MUCH!!!
GRRR!!! Anyways, it was great. . .

<3 Kit Kat

Aw that was a great ending. Loved it.

Another amazing story is over! But it was good, short and to the point with good drama along the way. :-)

that was cool, nice ending Love

Aww, I'm sad it's over.
But I enjoyed it tremendously nonetheless.
I loved the whole plot, it was very original and Leigh and Matt were very cute together.
I'll miss it though, which is usual with all of your stories once they've finished. =}
Loved it, dearest! It was a fabulous story, well-written, and just an uberly awesome story all around!

Absolutely wonderful ending, hun. I loved it to pieces : )

Aw, Leigh's dress was beautiful. ^_^ I loved the ending! It was so cute! And aw, she's pregnant, lol. :) Amazing ending, hun!

Sequel? ;)

:D

awesome ending!

Aww! I'm sad it's over, but I can't picture a better way for it to end. It was absolutely perfect!
I loved this story so much because it was so sweet.
Those moments that made my heart melt are rare in most stories.
I loved the wedding and her being pregnant. It was the sweetest thing ever!
I'm going to miss this story and Matt's character because he was such a sweetheart in this one.
I hope you're planning on writing more. Preferably about him.
I just can't resist that man.

That ending was absolutely one hundred percent perfect. I loved it more than I can say.
Really, I'll be missing the updates from this one. :D

Oh that was just perfect hun :) It really was the ending they both deserved, especially Leigh after what she had endured. And Brian finally met someone new as well...bless!

I've loved this story hun, and will no doubt read it again, like I do with all your wonderful stories :) xx

I bet she's preggers.
Aww, I bet any child Matt and Leigh would have would be such a cutie. =}
Brilliant chapter! I thought it was funny how the guys didn't want Matt to spend the night with Leigh.
Loved it!

Oh, man! I can't believe it's almost the end!
I really hope she has a baby, that would be so sweet!
I can't wait for the second part. :D