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  • ALOTA

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    update or else... haha, just kidding. PLEASE UPDATE THOUGH!! EVEN IF YOU HAVE TO FORCE YOURSELF UNWILLINGLY!!!
    January 9th, 2010 at 03:40am
  • tmwall

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    *subscribes*
    Is this discontinued forever, or only until you come up with some more inspiration? If you plan on continuing, please let me know!
    December 28th, 2009 at 11:47pm
  • ChristoferElizabeth

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    Amazing! It pulls you right in. I can't wait to read more. Great job.
    -subscribe-
    December 8th, 2009 at 09:29am
  • Wintergirl.

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    This is incredibly well written. And it's so intriguing. I love how you developed her character.
    *subscribe*
    September 13th, 2009 at 02:59am
  • secretXserenity

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    OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMFK OH MY FLUFFY KITTY KEEP WRITING TERR!!! i lurv's it!!!almost better than the other one!!! WHO!!! U RULE!!!
    *HAPPY DANCE*!!! Dance
    *subscribes*
    July 8th, 2009 at 04:21am
  • ladyvader

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    Wow, this is seriously awesome. I usually don't read stories with mutes because it's so over-used and cliche but this was so intense and I loved the last line. Got my heart pumping. And I laughed at the I-know-what-you're-about-to-say bitchy trio, because I do that all the time with my sisters and it creeps people out, haha. Can't wait for more!
    June 15th, 2009 at 04:16pm
  • plug-in-baby

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    loved it! cant wiat to read more:]]
    June 8th, 2009 at 09:56pm
  • PoisonousSoul

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    I thought this story was really good and seemed really interesting. Im going to subscribe (: I only have one bit of constructive feedback and that is that you said "because you see" alot, especially towards the end, and i think it would have been better with a few more variety of sentence starters. other then that it was perfect!
    May 22nd, 2009 at 09:12am
  • break.my.bones

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    This seems really intense. I'm subscribing.
    April 20th, 2009 at 05:39pm
  • monsterlilian

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    I liked it a lot.It was written wonderfully.I'm anxious for the next update.
    April 14th, 2009 at 09:41pm
  • xmoonlightxrose

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    Oh my.
    That was completely epic!
    Definitely keep writing this!
    April 8th, 2009 at 04:36am
  • jackxsally

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    You totally gotta hurry and write! I loves it!
    April 3rd, 2009 at 12:26am
  • Sarrawrr!:O

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    wow this was like...amazing...
    yeah amazing is exactly how to describe this.
    Really good job!
    Can't wait for the next update(:
    *subscribed!*
    March 28th, 2009 at 03:52am
  • Erinnnn.xo

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    Amazing.
    extremely interesting and well written.
    *subsribes*
    March 27th, 2009 at 10:00pm
  • TheInevitable

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    That chapter read like something from a book.
    Well done.

    *subscribed*
    March 24th, 2009 at 02:57am
  • TheInevitable

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    That chapter read like something from a book.
    Well, done.

    *subscribed*
    March 24th, 2009 at 02:57am
  • RCL.

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    Bye Hi, I like your story. I like the way you explained why she doesn't talk to people in books they make you read to the end to find out why and I just don't like that. Two thumbs up!
    March 22nd, 2009 at 05:46am
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