Beauty and the Beast - Comments

You comment on my story, and I realized that I've never actually commented on one of yours. I do read them, I'm just never one to comment, but this one, I've really fell in love with, to be honest, I've read it at least five times. At least. I've read a pretty good chunk of your stories so far, and this one just stands out, because it's so different from ones that are floating around on here. I like how it's in a journal, but you make it flow back to the past, it really kept me interested in the story. And I was just dying to know what happened in the end every second of the time, so that really drove me to read on.

All in all, I really love this story and I do hope you continue writing on with others, because you are a very talented writer. :D

AnUndefinedRomance:

Oh wow! I just started following your story a few days ago, and I loved it. The last chapter was a great way to wrap everything up.
The whole story was just lovely... Even if they hated each other's guts in the beginning, in the end their real feelings shown through-- because you had two awesome people that were also stubborn.
Thanks for writing this. :D

My favourite part of that chapter, besides all of the descriptions (I could picture it so easily):

When I opened the door I saw him sitting and smoking in front of the window. Sun was shining through his hair. When he saw me, he gave the most beautiful smile I ever saw.
“You okay?” I asked him unsure. He walked closer to me. It was only me and him left in this huge grey coloured bedroom. “I am now” he said and sat on the bed. I took a seat right in front if him. I saw many cigs smoked out in the ash-tray.

: ) Loved it!

oh wow thank you... you made me hooay

Oh wow! I just started following your story a few days ago, and I loved it. The last chapter was a great way to wrap everything up.
The whole story was just lovely... Even if they hated each other's guts in the beginning, in the end their real feelings shown through-- because you had two awesome people that were also stubborn.
Thanks for writing this. :D

My favourite part of that chapter, besides all of the descriptions (I could picture it so easily):

When I opened the door I saw him sitting and smoking in front of the window. Sun was shining through his hair. When he saw me, he gave the most beautiful smile I ever saw.
“You okay?” I asked him unsure. He walked closer to me. It was only me and him left in this huge grey coloured bedroom. “I am now” he said and sat on the bed. I took a seat right in front if him. I saw many cigs smoked out in the ash-tray.

: ) Loved it!

Thanks guys...

I see that I have 2/3 readers left, It made a bit sadder cos it was 30/40 at first...I think people didn't like to read it after chapter 20... but nevertheless I'm glad that you guys keep reading it...

I'm very thankfull to that...

gah! so many things to comment on! haha. ok. so, i loved how bam tricked her into going to ville, that was very sneaky & actually rather plausible ;) i was awing throughout the entire chapter; it was a lovely conlcusion to the story. the addition of 'beauty and the beast' tied it all together quite nicely & was a fun touch.

on a side note, i can't wait to read the rest of your writings :D

:shock: Its ended! OMG! >.< I can't believe it! Gosh, I loved it all though, wonderful story, and I'm sure I'm probably going to end up reading it over and over again! I can't wait for more of your stories x

stupid cliffhangers. haha. lovely. i liked how you jumped around in perspectives & times here. very nicely done

o man, that lipstick scene was to die for; it was so incredibly cute. made me have a 'i wish my lover would do that' moment... but then i realized i'd have to wear makeup...

i'm sad this story is ending because it's been so entertaining. i look forward to your future stories though, neverfear :)

i love the new chapter! & i am also more then willing to be patient :) they say 'good things come to those who wait' after all

....so all they had to do was hook up and they would have been nice to each other? ....well if thats love than i like it!

very interesting. i like that she's writing down the story

wah?!? more please! i don't think i can handle this story stopping here :(

oh good i was a tad bit lost at first when the girls said his wife... good chapter love the story

.....for a moment there i thought that was the last one... girl i almost cryed, but than i read your comment so yea i'm happy now!!!!!!!!!=?)

Awwwwh! I just read it till the end. I fucking loved it! I really wish that there was more. but oh well! anyways, Great Job!

aaaaaaa I love it!!! Please Update Soon!

so i just started reading it and me loves it(:
ville mean ;[
update soon?

thanks for your comments guys....

i hope there can be some sort of remdemption for them

ville has no heart... how can he just do that ? god he's a big fat-fat head!!