April 21st, 2009 at 05:31am
Aw, I love this story. You write really well. :cute:
More soon? :D
The Night You Took Away a Little More Than Just My Breath - Comments
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April 21st, 2009 at 05:06am
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oh they TOTALLY want each other.
i love how he read her diary then quoted it.
ahhh i love them together :D
especially the sexual tension hahaApril 20th, 2009 at 01:58am -
This story is really good(:April 19th, 2009 at 06:53am
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Oh I totally knew she was going to try to kiss him. And that photoshoot totally made him fall head over heels for her.April 18th, 2009 at 06:40pm
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I dont like alexis she's too forward
And it seems like jamie and johno like each other which is kinds weird
I love it thoughApril 15th, 2009 at 03:39am -
i bet she's written about johno in her diary!!! :O haha idk maybe...
i didn't like alexis much she seemed to pushy and not interesting :|
more please i can't wait until the next chapter!!!! :DApril 14th, 2009 at 05:55am -
I keep getting this weird feeling that john and his step sister are gonna fall for eachother.. is that even allowed? i mean they arent blood related sooo.. idk lolApril 14th, 2009 at 04:35am
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my vote still goes to jamie and john ahha. can't wait for the next one!April 14th, 2009 at 04:12am
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hahaha oh johns so NOT a virgin.
haha and i really want him and jamie to hook up.
even though kennedy obviously wants her.
no alexis :[April 12th, 2009 at 09:45pm -
yay haha i liked this chapter!!
they sound really cute together :OApril 11th, 2009 at 06:30pm -
i hope john and jamie get together! but how awkward would that be because they're technically related...
can't wait for the next chapter!April 11th, 2009 at 09:24am -
Hahaha I love this story.
I had this crazy idea of what would happen, muhaha do you wanna know what I think might happen?!April 11th, 2009 at 06:27am -
Is Jordan Going To Have To Slap A... Step-Sister ?
Yeahhh,maybe.April 10th, 2009 at 05:03pm -
Oh I'm so excited for this. Jordans so jealous already. Ah I love this :)April 10th, 2009 at 04:06am
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good chapter :)
can't wait for more!April 9th, 2009 at 11:47pm -
Jamie and John are going to fall in love with eachother, and keep telling themselves that they don't really like the other, even though they do, just because they think it's really weird because she's going to be his step-sister!!!!!! THEN ONE DAY THEY'RE GONNA ACCEPT IT AND HOOK UP! =DDDApril 9th, 2009 at 01:50am
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:O jamie and johno?!
haha i agree with the comment above meApril 7th, 2009 at 11:50pm -
either jamie and john are going to hook up
or jamie and kennedy will hook up then john will get jealous
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Are Johno & Jamie gonna get it on ?
I loved it, tooApril 7th, 2009 at 08:36pm
:O
I loved the update.
More soon?