It's A Game, But Who's Keeping Score? - Comments

  • Sparklingbows

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    Even though you wrote this a while ago, it still has touched me. I absoulutley loved it! Very Happy
    May 22nd, 2013 at 11:53pm
  • OhhJodie

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    i <3 it loved so much xx im glad they ended up together
    June 10th, 2010 at 08:48pm
  • izzylizzy95

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    i loved this story! it's one of the best i've read and i've read a lot. keep writing! :)

    and that name olalla made me laugh everytime i read it
    February 16th, 2010 at 08:12am
  • be fearless.

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    I looooved this story so much!!!!!
    trust me, i was basically addicted.....i read the prequel and this in like an hour....hahaha
    oh, and thank you for making them end up together at the end!! (i was getting worried hehe)
    it was perfect :)
    December 27th, 2009 at 03:59am
  • georgii

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    Aww, I'm kind of glad they didn't live happily ever after; I can see them having quite a few rows while they're together but I like that they always end up in each other's arms.
    This was a great story and I really enjoyed writing it.
    September 27th, 2009 at 07:18pm
  • georgii

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    That might not be the end? Yay!
    I'm so happy he walked out on Olalla, it needed to be done. And so sweet with all the rose petals leading to him, aww.
    My favourite part of this chapter: Sergio looking stunning.
    I hope this isn't the final chapter, but if it is then you ended it brilliantly :)
    September 26th, 2009 at 09:04am
  • hola19

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    i love it he so has to choose rebecca he can't go for olalla hope you update soon great work
    September 22nd, 2009 at 03:23pm
  • georgii

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    I'm sad the next one is the end too.
    But I have this feeling he'll choose her. It's always been her, Olalla's just been in the way.
    And by the way, if he doesn't choose Rebecca I will force you to write another sequel! ;)
    September 20th, 2009 at 11:45pm
  • georgii

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    Pepe definitely has something planned and he's gonna try and stop Nando from marrying Olalla. I'm glad everyone else can see they're supposed to be together.
    I have a feeling something will happen and he'll find out the baby isn't his and go running back to Rebecca. Well, I hope something like that happens anyway, because I like happy endings.
    And that's why I've changed my mind from thinking he was going to marry Olalla before realising everything was right with Rebecca.
    September 19th, 2009 at 01:56pm
  • lafuriaroja17

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    They're totally gonna be at the wedding and she's gonna like stop everything and tell Fernando. Just sayin....haha this is sooo good!
    September 17th, 2009 at 04:19am
  • georgii

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    For some reason it wouldn't surprise me if Fernando married Olalla before realising that he is in fact supposed to be with Rebecca. Silly boy.
    And I'm sorry for being a comment fail lately, I haven't commented anything in weeks! I'll leave you a proper comment probably tomorrow because the CL is on tonight, yay!!
    September 16th, 2009 at 07:07am
  • Margaritaville

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    i believe that pepe has something planned out for the bachelor party that includes Rebecca! xD
    September 16th, 2009 at 05:45am
  • georgii

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    ONLY four more chapters? What?! Noooo.
    Though Fernando's right, what about Olalla? Hahaha.
    I wonder what the reaction to her not playing will be, and I wonder why Fernando wants to go on a drive with her? I can't wait for more, so update soon even if it does bring it closer to the end.
    September 5th, 2009 at 12:22am
  • j3nnn.

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    good update (:

    oh and i hope your cold will be over soon!
    September 2nd, 2009 at 11:04pm
  • georgii

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    I hope you feel better soon :)
    Rafa's suspending her? Just for hitting 'Nando? Psh. Though I guess she did hit him.
    Wonder why Fernando called Sergio immediately after she hit him...maybe there's something going on there, or maybe I'm looking too much into it. Haha.
    September 2nd, 2009 at 09:55pm
  • georgii

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    Camp good?
    I'm glad Lukas was okay with everything that went on between them, that he wasn't too hurt they wouldn't be going out.
    And they seem to have suceeded in winding Fernando up. Gosh that boy can have a temper sometimes. ;)
    August 30th, 2009 at 08:42am
  • georgii

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    Ohmygod what is she doing?!
    But I completely do not blame her, mmmm Lukas. And Fernando is being an idiot, and they're not dating or anything, plus it's Lukas (mmmm) so it's all okay and I don't actually mind. Mmm, Lukas. <3
    August 22nd, 2009 at 07:18pm
  • georgii

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    He's proposing?!?! What the hell?! She can't possibly say yes, but I bet she does.
    Though I'm liking how Pepe wants to wait until the time is right before people know. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
    August 22nd, 2009 at 07:08pm
  • j3nnn.

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    just read some chapters, up till 10
    I'll read the other two tomorrow (:

    good updates, as always.
    August 9th, 2009 at 11:08pm
  • hola19

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    i love it! hope you update soon it's amazing
    August 6th, 2009 at 07:59pm