Sleeping In A Graveyard - Comments

I agree, I think it a bad idea for here to out alone at this time of night.
Great update and can't for the next one.

Ooh, I can feel the tension building :)
And it does seem as though everyone is against Kaedan :(
Looking forward to the next update :D

It seems that Aurora favors Lance over Kaeden.
Well I still can't decided which I like better.
great update.

Aurora is a bit of a hypocrite, but perhaps she has her reasons.
I loved the irony of how Aurora said Marionette didn't have friends that were alive :D
Cool pic :)

So Aurora is also dating a Vampire...how interesting.
I guess both sisters are drawn to the supernatural. Well I hope that Kaeden keeps his word in not hurting Marionette.
Can't wait for more.

Haha, both sisters appear to have a thing for the supernatural. Or perhaps the 'dead' :P.
I want things to work out for Kaeden and Marionette....but I also want Lance and Marionette to somehow get together. :S
I'm confused (but in a good way) :D

Ahmazing!

That was really interesting :)
Aurora is intriguing. How does she know??
:D

And the picture is awesome :P

Aurora doesn't want ot see her sister get hurt and know she is going to find out answers from Kaeden. I know what it is like a to be protective of your younger sister. I would have probably done the same thing. Love the update.

I so can't wait for the next chapter. Auroura is more that what she appears.
Love the update.

I just started to read this and it is amazing! I can't wait for the next update to find out why Kaden can't read her mind!... she can't be a vampire right? Well, not an older one... right? lol I have no idea :XD
I think I'm more of a Lance person.... not sure why, but I think I am lol

Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It good thing that Kaden was there to rescue her.

Poor Lance. I hope he gets himself sorted out so that he can stay solid for longer :)

And wouldn't she also have the same problem with Kaeden? Well, not that she knows he is a vampire, but he can't age either right?

Well, I'm interested in finding out :D
I've been waiting for this story to be updated :)

I wonder what Lance has in store for his date with Marionette.

Lol, playing hide-and-seek in the cemetary. That's a cool idea. :)

Argh, I want a coat like that one in the picture. Lol

Alice Practice:

The was a really cool picture at the end. :P
Cool update. :) I'm still confused over which one I like better :D

Oh, man.... I can't decide which one I like, either.... and I just really like this vampire thingy ^_^

Chapter 10: The date was cute, as well as the music, but I wish you could've done more to explain what made it special rather than just stating the obvious such as "never feeling this way before," "secrets being shared with no one else but one another," etc. But what MADE the ACTUAL date special? I felt it was extremely brief for a night so important to Marionette. However, your point was clearly made.

Chapter nine: More details, please; you know how fond of them I am. I noticed that after each dialogue, you tend to bring in the details THEN. Have some paragraphs dedicated to useless, detailed, almost-irrelevant things. Make you sure you give the readers the privilege of imagining more than just what the characters are talking about; Background, my woman, and more of it. The story is now slowly readying itself for a climax, I see. Come on, drown me with ROMANCE!!!

MORE I SAY MORE!!

awesome story! you have an ability to make addicts out of whoever reads your stories. i love the pictures at the end of the chapters too.

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