Me in love with him... Yeah right! - Comments

  • JustASpoonfulOfJimmy

    JustASpoonfulOfJimmy (100)

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    I love this story <3 my parents must have thought i was insane just laughing randomly
    keep writing chick its amazing

    Jen x
    November 14th, 2009 at 09:40pm
  • Desert Moon

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    Awesome story!!! >xD I tried not to laugh at some parts....>xD Update soon?! :)
    July 2nd, 2009 at 06:47am
  • Nicolette;

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    OK I love your story, don't get me wrong but you need to rewrite it! Grammar and spelling mistakes everywhere. I could edit them for you if you'd like that but either way, argh! I wouldn't really try to help this much if I didn't like the plot. I love the plot. And you give too much information in certain and unneeded places. So again, I'll be more than happy to help you out. Just give me the word.

    Other than that, nice chapters and can't wait for chapter nine! (:
    April 29th, 2009 at 06:29pm