L'été Dans B - Comments

Lalalalala.
Updateupdateupdateupdate.
Loveyouloveyouloveyouloveyou.
Pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease.
Love,
Lillie.
But seriously. I need some action. NOW.

Update soon! I have subscribed =]

I totally have been neglecting mibba, and I'm sorry I haven't commented sooner.
I LOVED the update, especially the little piece of Robin. It was lovely. And Ryan is stupid. Just so you know. :

I liked the new chapter, Mel. Even if you didn't. :)

Oh, but I liked this chapter!
It was sort of poignant, in a way.
Very spiffy. :)

I should really be studying for my PSAT tomorrow.
But of coarse, I read an update instead.
I'll regret this later, I'm glad you updated.

Omg, how can you hate this?
Is Ryan's mom, like, planning their wedding or something?
'Cause she said "future wife"...
And, oh! She's gonna meet him! How exciting :D

Silence spread over the shaded side yard as the sun winked between crowded trees.
Amazing. Pure genius~

I absolutely ADORED that chapter. It was brilliant. xD

And now she's going to meet him!

This story is brilliant. I love, love, love it!! You are such a good writer : )

...why was I not informed of this update sooner, Mibba?
:|

I loved that update.
It was so painfully awkward, it was endearing.
I adore the way you write.
More soon, please. :)

x

this is probably THE best fanfiction i have ever read
and im not just saying that...
the details described are so amazingly put...and it seems as if your vocabulary is extensive due to the various interesting words you use...
im only on the fifth chapter, but i will definately read more...its amazing =]

thanks for the update. i like how you portrayed Ryan's awkward-ness.

The Young Veins:

Holy fuck! I was fucking right! I CALLED IT! FUCKING CALLED IT! HE EVEN RAN!

Shit, you were right.

Anyway, great update. I love the way you write.
I'm sorry I forgot your birthday.
Oh, and I love the name Robin. It's lovely.
That 'lovely' wasn't sarcastic.
UPDATE SOON! For me?

Holy fuck! I was fucking right! I CALLED IT! FUCKING CALLED IT! HE EVEN RAN!

Okay, so I'm at the part where mommy dearest is calling for Ryan to meet someone. That 'someone' is going to be that girl. My above prediction still stands.

I'm guessing that he's going to meet the girl he's been stalking, and then find a way to make a fool of himself, then run away.

That whole week he had watched the house across the street with an interest akin to stalking, in the hopes that it would betray the young, decidedly female, presence inside.
Wow. What a creeper. I mean honestly. Come on Ryan, show a little backbone.

I love how his mom already knows that he met a girl. Ryan's just that predictable. Off to finish now. :)
(You see, since I forgot your birthday, I think I'm going to spam your comments)