Arkham Asylum Records: Patient 4297 - Comments

Hahaha, this is fucking epic! Damn, I wish there was more chapter. Please, could you update? I love this so much!

Write more, person.
Or I'll somehow murder you indirectly.
WRITE!!

I don't usually read comic book fanfiction because I don't know it very well, but this was interesting. I like the way your presented the dialog; it is believable and strong and carriers the story. Even though there isn't much description, I can visual what is happening.

Just one thing, the events of chapter three seemed very rushed. I would have liked to seen it a bit more drawn out. I wanted the realization that the Joker was talking about the doctor's daughter to be more dramatic, because it seemed very tame?

But otherwise, very good :)

Yeah, I know I said I didn't want to read fanfictions, but there's an exception sometimes. Heh. I'm not in the best of moods right now to give a decent review (I went on a ten mile walk). So forgive me if this is shitty.

I like the format of this. It's easy to read and even though there's no real descriptions, I got a lot out of it. I like the witty comments and comebacks from the Joker. I also like how it's set after the movie and you even mentioned it.

In chapter two, I found one mistake: Dr. Quinzel, you are dismissed from this session. You don't know who's saying it. I'm assuming it's O'Shea.

I'm looking forward to more.

I really love this it is so great and the type of things I like to read.#

I love the way it is written like a real set of notes.

I think it is brilliant the way you have really tried to get in his head, i like that alot.

Please write more

Dana

What I like is that this isn't just another Joker fic where he falls madly in love with a girl that used to have a terrible life, or had an odd obsession about him. This story is about the Joker, and I thank you for that. I like that it's written in script format, it actually quite fun to read. I find this story very entertaining and very true to the Joker.

Ooh, I've never really been one for Joker stories, but you've got me hooked. :) I love it! *subscribes*

Haha. I loved the ending of that. Very cool. Very Joker-like to toy with someone like that.

I'm really enjoying this. The transcripts are great!
More please? :]

lol very funny story. cant wait to read more :K

Clearly you’re not in a clear state of mind after that incident in order to continue with today’s session.

This sentence was a bit confusing for me. I think it may have been the use of "clearly" and "clear" so close together. And the part that goes "...that incident in order to..." seems a bit offf.

Nice update, though. I liked the way The Joker and H. Quinn interacted. I like that she's easily spurred and not very professional. It looks like something good is going to happen.

I like the way this is written – the formatting of it. The way you’ve done the dialogue here is very believable. A lot of people try to write medical conversations and most fail miserable. This was very good.

PATIENT: Nice guy.

When I read that, I smiled. It’s a very simple line, but it’s really just something The Joker would say.

PATIENT: Because the batman,

Was ‘batman’ intentionally not capitalized?

O’SHEA: So why would they bring you here instead of putting you in jail?

When I read this, I thought that maybe the doctor would use the word ‘prison’ instead of ‘jail.’ Maybe it’s just me, though, but I think of ‘jail’ as a more laymen’s term.

PATIENT: I’m here because I want to be. If I didn’t, I wouldn’t be here.

I love that line. It’s something that’s very true of The Joker. He always manages to find his way out of Gotham’s Asylum when he puts his mind to it.

Is it going to stay like this for a while? The formatting, I mean. Overall I liked this. When he mentioned H. Quinn, I automatically thought “has he already seen a weakness in her?” Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Thanks for this TT__TT I've been waiting so long for a REAL Joker story... One that captures who he really is and not some godawful I-love-teh-Joker story...

I can't wait for more :D