I forgot how talented of a writer you are. This story is so unlike all your other ones, and in a very very good way. You describe things so ... effortlessly. It makes the story feel like its a dream. I love it. And Lillia is still not my cup of tea, but she's adorable. And Jimmy. Oh Jimmy. Jimmymylove.
Seriously I absolutely love this story.. its so sweet.. and their relationship is progressing slow which is good because she is the kinda girl that deserves that... I cant wait for an update
Sweet ass update. I'm really happy she's going on tour, and not just waiting to fly out for her appointment. I don't think the feelings between her and Brian could have lasted that long.
I get the feeling some shit is gonna go down on tour though...and knowing you - BIG shit. :XD
OH YOU SLICK LITTLE MOTHERFUCKER. I was trying so hard to figure out how they were going to stay together and I just could not figure it out, but then you just slip that on in. Nice. :XD
Oh geez. Her parents are CRAZY. i love the bit you put in about her Dad's reaction to Bribri and Lillia having checked in their V-Cards. Cute. :XD
Oh my gosh. This is THE BEST update so far. I love this story Beej. I really fuckin' do.
Matt could barely believe that the man sitting on his couch was Brian. It wasn't that Brian was loose, it's just that he was...well...kind of loose... :lmfao That was really funny, and it was an awesome line to put in there. It really shows how much of an effect Lillia has on Brian. She's changing him and they've just met. Mattie boy has ever right to be worried about what would happen if she came on tour.
They were honestly like rabbits. It's a surprise Allison wasn't pregnant. NO. If you do that in THIS STORY TOO... I WILL kill you.
AND LASTLY: He used what energy he had left, not realizing till just now how tired he was, to turn over and wrap his arms around the soft waist of the beautiful girl beside him. EVERYBODY WITH ME NOW - "AWWWWWWWWWW".
Hm. THAT was a shock. I definately was expecting them to have more to do with each other. I hope something happens that makes her go on tour. She's a really cool character Beej. :]
I'm so glad that Lilia is beginning to see again. :3 Makes me tear up a little bit.