I really enjoyed this! The descriptions were perfect, and it felt like I was there with her. Usually it takes about five or six chapters for me to get into a story, but after only two, I love it and I can't wait for more. I love the slight humor in this too. Like the line "Congradulations, you're knocked up." It made me crack a smile. X] Good job, me gusta. :D
November 3rd, 2011 at 11:15pm