This is a really fantastic story. I've suddenly become obsessed with Janto (not that I wasn't already) after *sniff* recent events, and I think this is written so well. I can literally see it happening. Keep writing, this story rocks!
I never read this ... well now i have and i understood everything - maybe thats because im a dr who and torchwood whore ... hey ho anyway well done and liked it
Ok ignoring that you wrote it, I enjoyed it. It's good, it's nice to hear Ianto's point of view. Just a suggestion (feel free to ignore it) maybe a bit of first person or a change in POV? Keep up the good work.
I love your story :D
im a huge fan of Torchwood so i really enjoyed reading this :D