The Other Sister - Comments

this is really good.

update soon

You did seem to put a lot of effort into writing this, but you also seem to make her seem too old. She's supposed to personify a teenager, I assume, not a 40-year-old. Then, the plot seems to follow Twilight and there aren't any events that you seem to create. The majority of the story so far is her trying to master her abilities, and nothing much actually happens.

This is wonderful! ^_^
And just take your time writing this. I know what it's like to have writer's block. But yeah.....this is good! :)

i really like this but, a quick suggestion, change the font color... i'd really like reading this without highlighting it

Wonderful as always.

Much love yet again. Rather interesting.

Magical.Mayhem:

this is really awsome! i want to know whats next! Are you going to do the whole twilight saga?

Thanks!
Actually I've been thinking about it... I'm not sure yet.
I couldn't decide what would be best :x lol

this is really awsome! i want to know whats next! Are you going to do the whole twilight saga?

Thank you all so much!!!! I really do appreciate it a lot! :D

Good story, :). I've only read up to, and including, chapter three, and I like it. I'll continuing reading when I've got the time.

*tears* is she leaving?????

Much love yet again.

I'm liking it so far. =D Its original, compared to others. You're very good at writing and it's actually not all to similar to the actual book which is good, the description is good and I'm liking where it's heading.

Thanks! Glad you like it :D

wow this is really good...update soon

Your welcome. I enjoyed it again.

Thank you so much!

I like this so far. : ) Very much so.

awwwww come on I can't wait I want to know what happens:(
oh well I'll get over it so you'll have to update like everyday at least one chapter
Its a great story I just read the new chapter I like how she's so catious (didnt spell that right) can't you give me any hints as to whats gonna happen maybe just a litte
but yeah great story again:)

Thank you so much! I'm actually about to update right after I reply. :D
As for your question, I'm not sure I can really answer that, well not at the moment anyway. :D I guees you'll have to keep reading to see what happens... Thanks again for the comment!!