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  • Alphadisaster

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    I love this! Can't wait for more.
    March 13th, 2011 at 06:35am
  • sassyback

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    okay...wow. I really like this.

    I like that it is kind of feasable...I mean obviously you've bent and twised timescales and stuff and thrown in extra characters..just basically changed some stuff to make it fit better, but the basic plotline is really believable.

    secondly, this is really well written, I don't find myself thinkingn"get to the next interesting bit" and skipping paragraphs lke i ussually do cuase this is realy good

    thirdly...I am excited to see where this will go next, and usually i need tragic cliff hanger for that.

    so yeah all in all i like this

    more soon please : )

    peace...love....Santi
    January 24th, 2010 at 11:05am
  • John W. Lennon

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    I don't know how I didn't find this before :] It's like my new favourite story, seriously. Please update soon, it's awesome and very rare that you actually find good Gabilliams on this website!
    June 3rd, 2009 at 11:54pm
  • Stars.Aline.

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    AHHHHH i am so jealous you get to Death Cab for Cutie. Well tell me if they are amazing live please. Loved the chapter by the way.
    May 8th, 2009 at 04:02am
  • iamFINE

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    I loooooooooooooooooooooooove this story! =] Thanks for updating.

    And the writing style doesn't make you sound like a bad writer. Actually, I think it's really great.
    <3 Manda
    May 7th, 2009 at 10:32pm
  • Human

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    very cute.

    update again soon? :D
    May 7th, 2009 at 09:57pm
  • alex suarez.

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    Yay for warped band history!
    More soon?
    And aww, I got the cutest image of William in a WalMart uniform!
    May 7th, 2009 at 11:43am
  • black_like_my_coffee

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    awwwww
    i like how creeped-out/in-lust william is
    May 4th, 2009 at 04:46pm
  • Olober Sykes.

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    this is very cute.
    im enjoying it.
    April 22nd, 2009 at 08:18am
  • Stars.Aline.

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    This is quite awesomness lol
    i cant wait for the next update
    April 18th, 2009 at 08:22pm
  • Metamorphosis

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    I loved it. Update soon :]
    April 17th, 2009 at 08:41pm
  • nashville owen

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    This is really awesome. Update soon?
    April 17th, 2009 at 01:45am
  • iamFINE

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    Woot! Thanks for updating. I love this story.

    Bill Ross?
    lol =]

    Please update soon?
    <3 Manda
    April 17th, 2009 at 01:08am
  • Human

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    it's very lovely.

    Brendon would be the one in the ball pit :)

    update again soon.
    April 16th, 2009 at 09:50pm
  • Human

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    adorable.

    please update again soon?

    *subscribes*
    April 14th, 2009 at 08:54am
  • JonWalker

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    Great job so far. I love William's train of thought tons, and I cannot wait for more. (:
    March 31st, 2009 at 05:25am
  • be human.

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    This is really good!
    I really enjoy this, even though there's only been one chapter..
    Anyways, I can't wait for the next update..
    March 28th, 2009 at 01:08am
  • CharChar;

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    Ohh!
    I really love this.
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    More soon?
    Gosh, I can't get over how much I love this.
    March 27th, 2009 at 08:40pm
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