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  • carcinogenic.

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    In Love
    November 29th, 2007 at 04:11am
  • Inksie

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    I don't think I'll ever get enough of your work. As soon as I commented on your other story, I read it, and immediately rushed over to your profile. You're like the Kurt to my Cobain. Your words, your metaphors, your comparisons, are all beyond praise. No words can describe the shudders I got while reading your powerful story.

    But about the story: I sure hope Frankie's okay. :( And why is Gerard so mean? :<
    November 28th, 2007 at 10:25am
  • Rosebud

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    wow
    this is really good!
    you are such a good writer!!!
    November 6th, 2007 at 06:26am
  • mon_visage

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    Wow.
    Thats amazing.
    I can't even write a comment which'll give you the credit you deserve
    Just.... wow.
    Its amazing as always.
    I.L.Y. seriously
    In Love
    October 29th, 2007 at 12:00am
  • suddenxsilence

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    holy buhjeeeez
    you need to update cause there is a lack of good stories in the world!!!
    <3
    October 16th, 2007 at 10:59am
  • carcinogenic.

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    Thank you so much, both of youuu. :]]]]]
    Carys... eeek. ILY.
    Your ava is goooorgeous, btw.
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    September 11th, 2007 at 10:16am
  • doll face.

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    Jesus_Of_Port_Toilet:
    Jeeze... you are such an amazing writer!
    Your descriptions are raw and imaginitive :)
    I'm in love with your writing style and I totally get addicted to all of your writings.

    This is such a good piece and I love everyword :D
    That just about sums it up!

    I almost forgot about this one. Note the almost. I re-read it to remind myself
    why it was so fantastic. Turns out I didn't need to. Everything you write is flawless.

    I sound like a complete suck-up. I don't mean to be, but I don't lie.


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    September 11th, 2007 at 05:34am
  • Jesus_Of_Port_Toilet

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    Jeeze... you are such an amazing writer!
    Your descriptions are raw and imaginitive :)
    I'm in love with your writing style and I totally get addicted to all of your writings.

    This is such a good piece and I love everyword :D
    September 11th, 2007 at 04:56am
  • carcinogenic.

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    I'm sorry you're not feeling well! :O
    You managed to make mesmile suuuperrr-wide with your comment anyways. :]]
    THANK YOU!
    I promise, I'm working on an update for this. &#9829;
    September 11th, 2007 at 03:38am
  • Carlyumz

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    I only just found this, you do no wrong with your stories- seriously.
    I could ramble and gush just like i do with headlights but i'm feeling too ill to stare at this screen any longer, so i'll make a better more-coherent comment when i next comment,
    I adore this concept already but you just bring something so new to the cliche, bringing it alive and making it seem that much more fantastic.

    "Whores, toys, mannequins, stapled to dirty mattresses, drowning in the overpowering smell of stale sex and sweat just like I am; like all the boys before me…

    All his precious little machines.
    "
    Perfect, i couldn't not subscribe, analogies like that deserve to be rewarded. I hope you continue this whenever you have free time =]
    September 11th, 2007 at 02:25am
  • carcinogenic.

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    THANK YOU! :]
    July 12th, 2007 at 03:16am
  • Beetlejuice

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    THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING<33
    July 12th, 2007 at 03:12am
  • carcinogenic.

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    doll face.:
    You know I'm even more sure now that no piece of writing from you could
    be anything less than amazing if you had a full-frontal labotomy.
    CARYS. That made me grin like an idiot. :]

    In Love

    I'm glad you don't hate me.
    That would be silly, since you're extrememly talented
    && I'm jealous. :]]]
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    July 11th, 2007 at 03:07am
  • doll face.

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    FUCK NO. Why'd you leave it there?!

    Another amazing update. You know I'm even more sure now that no piece of writing from you could
    be anything less than amazing if you had a full-frontal labotomy. Jesus Christ. If I didn't love you
    I'd hate you for it. >:[

    Buuut. I can still see, this seems to just get better and better as it progresses. Which is saying somethin'
    Trust me.


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    July 11th, 2007 at 02:55am
  • Zaraza

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    Oh, F it, I'm both.

    I'm sure you'll fix it. Yo have no idea how many wrong turns I've taken while writing a fic... There were times where I just wanted to take the whole thing down.

    Yes, so I decided to change it. Yep =)

    ily.
    July 11th, 2007 at 01:21am
  • carcinogenic.

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    You're psychic instead of psychotic now! :]]

    Yeah, that was the plan... anoother argument.
    I'm just a lazy dork . :]
    But I'm gonna write it && get it posted before I leave on Saturday. :]]

    Yeahh, mine disappeared too.
    Mibba was down for what? Like 2 days?
    And then POOF. When it came back, all the images were gone. Weeeeeird. :]

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    July 11th, 2007 at 01:18am
  • Zaraza

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    Oh... Well.

    Where are you going? (see? I read minds.)

    LoL, they can have an argument about it and Frankie can say that he doesn't wanna go.

    Thank you! I kinda like it too. All of my ava's magically disappeared, you see...
    July 11th, 2007 at 01:02am
  • carcinogenic.

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    Zaraza:
    I LOVE YOU TOO!

    Going away..?
    Lmao, as in, I don't hate it anymore.

    But I am going away, ironically.
    Next Saturday. x[

    So I swear I'm gonna update Headlights before that!
    Maybe even today.

    The problem is, I fucked up, 'cos I don't want them to go to a hotel anymore. XD

    ILY!

    I love your new avvie too! :]
    July 11th, 2007 at 12:47am
  • Zaraza

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    I LOVE YOU TOO!

    Going away..?
    July 11th, 2007 at 12:43am
  • carcinogenic.

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    -squeals- EEEEEEEEEEEEE ZARAZA I LOVE YOU! :]]]].
    Thank you to everyone, seriously.
    I went through this weird period of hating everything
    I'd written in this story, but it's going away. :]]
    You're all AMAZING as fuck.
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    !
    July 11th, 2007 at 12:17am