Precious Machines - Comments

Well at least he vomitted the pills out.
Poor Frank, he's always the 'fuck-toy'

Update soon?
<33

Alright, I haven't read chapter 3 yet,
but I managed to squeeze in a little break at work and read chapter 2 on my cell phone,
and I have to say that it is my favorite chapter.
Ever.
Not just this story. Any story.
I have no idea what it is about it, but it just blew my ficking mind.

Thank you so much. It made my day.

EDIT: Chapter 3 - Holy fuck. I'm sorry, I'm speechless. ILY.

wait what?!
why is he like dying now if he just puked everything up?
i don't get it
but it was really good
maybe with the next chapter i will understand
<3

UH OH!
Someone is in troubleeee.
Update soon?
<33

oooh that was a great chapter
i just love completely thorough you are with out making the story drag
*applaus*
can't wait to see what happens next
ps:i can't spell

oh i absolutely adore this story
it is so descriptive and yet it isn't too wordy if you know what i mean
fantastic job and i can't wait for more

Gah, guys, I'm speechless.

THANKYOUSOSOSOMUCH.

Z: Feel better!

Carys: ...like I said, I'm speechless. :]

ILYSM.

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FUCK. ME.

I seriously read the first couple of lines and did this little jaw-drop-eyes-wide thing.

The sudden rush of adrenaline has congealed into gelatin waste in my bloodstream, caking along
the red walls of my veins like glittery residue, clotting in my arteries, weighing me down as though
I’ve finally started to just fucking atrophy

I swear, your analogies just keep getting better and better, which I didn't actually think was possible.
And I never know what to say at this point. Only that I'll be watching this one like a hawk and fucking
drafting my comments because this deserves a whole lot better than my stuttering reviews.

So, great, you've turned me into a rambling idiot, and I have something else to blackmail you with now. :]

That was great. Truly, truly.

And I don't mind you writing new stories because I know that update can be a bitch... =)

But this was great; the fact that I know what kind of a person Gerard is,
even though he wasn't even in the room. And i can relate to Frank and his nausea because that's what I'm going through right now, HaH.

Can't wait for more, this story or other. I wonder if Gerard will come back..?

ILY.