Hangar 18 - Comments

I can't believe I didn't comment here. Could have sworn I did.
Totally being 3 years late here but seriously like it's not erry day you come across an original idea that's legit, totally new.
(Don't write me off as tossing you a consolation here, I'm sirius serious.)
I do like the brief sentences. May have to try that sometime. My sentences are too detailed.
And the jumbled sciencey-ness of the whole piece - of course I'd enjoy that.
(Sorry if this's a bit generic sounding, dear, I read it a while ago and I'm too tired even to write ATLoR. )

Wow. I seriously, 110% love this.
It's so original and well written.
Keep and up, and I can't wait until the next chapter

I love your writing style
its beautiful.
And I would love you to update!
Really I would love it

I didn't get the alert from Mibba on this update. Good thing I desided to check my subscriptions!

Nice work on the plot line introduction. The pace is a bit quick for a sort of 'timeline change' to the present, but I do enjoy jumping right into the story and meeting the characters as they are.

The shyness and mystery surrounding Skylar is very suiting. I really like how you've worded her dialog as well. It really reminds me that she is a machine, and not human as we all assume. Also, the discription of her eyes was neato :3

I'll be waiting for the next installment!

My lord, bravo on the intro! I'm totally captivated by your writing style.
Update soon!