Cosmopolitan Blood Loss. - Comments

Yes!
I've stripped it down to enter it in NanoWrimo's contest.
So I'll be changing things here and there to make them follow how my writing has progressed.
Thank you for asking though, I forgot to mention the hiatus' reason.

I miss this story :( any updates soon?

I get so excited everytime I see you've posted a part of this story. XD

Thank you all for replying!
Your blunt honesty and your support for the story and my writing warm my heart. Thank you, bbs. I'll get to working on the next chapter A.S.A.P. Dedicated to all that voted. I adore you guys.

i think you should continue writing how you usually do, details are great but don't over do it,, the writing should just flow from you. im up for however you wanna write the next chapter, cus original vampire stories are hard to come by these days and yours has been stuck on my mind for days..lol

Sounds like everyone is leaning towards option A. :D I don't really care. But def not option C. Please. :)

Well, you know me...:file:

SMUT.

i'm a huge perv, so A!!!

Hmm, Just go with which most you feel most comfortable writing.

Just.. not option two. If you please :)

I'm just gonna go ahead and say what I think the majority of people (and me obviously) will want, blunly we all want SUMT!

Oh wow, thank you so much.
Seriously, thank you for taking the time out to read my story and leave me a comment. I'm working on the next chapter, but I don't want to disappoint again.

Wow im pretty much dying for an update. Sooooo if you could :)
Thatd be great. As your story is. Or else i wouldnt be beggingu sorta to update.
Uve got somethin good going i think

Aw, you guys are too sweet. Yeah, I'll just let you in on it now, there are TWO types of action in the next update. I've been out of school for a couple weeks and my writing style is falling downhill. But I love you guys, seriously! Thank you so much!

I thought the chapter was amazing, even if it was a filler XD

Yayayayayay! Update!

Action, hmm? That's how I generally interpret things.

So, is the red eye thing bloodlust? Is Shant getting stalked by the other vampire? Why hasn't Shant redecorated that damn church yet? WILL THEY HAVE HOT MAD VAMPY SEX ON THE ALTAR?!

Yeah. Please update soon, I'm terribly curious here. :cute:

Woah woah woahh,

Did you just call your story 'horribly written'?

It isn't horribly written at all D: I love it tbh.

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Haha, I'm stoked for them too.
Because they are still floating around in my mind as little story embryos waiting to become more then zygotes and so forth. Nine is half way done as of yet.

-cheers-
I'm stoked for the new upcoming chapters.
=]

Wow, thank you for noticing all those things!
I've never gotten a comment when people actually pick out things, because they liked it and they want to know more!
Thanks, it definitely gets addressed, actually in like the third paragraph of the next chapter!
Yay! My first reader comment that adressed things they hope get eleborated on!
Kudos, you definitely earned brownie points with me. <333

Yeah, it was still funny. And it was still original. And I still loved it. :arms:

Shant...What's up with him and that other guy? Hmm. And the whole daylight thing...

But I'm sure you'll get around to that. :cute: