She Calls Me Sweetheart - Comments

what made this more amazing is, that my name is Kaitlyn Pham. Close to Kaitlyn Parker. haha! this was amazingg. make more (: or a sequal! anythingg. i just want more. (:

i really love the overall tone of this.
the general vibe just gets to me.

quite honestly, I really liked this. I feel like this could have been extended into a much longer story but you did quite a good job mashing it down into one chapter. There were a few parts that were a bit brief but that’s only because its hard to get all the information without going into major detail, I get that. But I thought that their relationship was so cute and so awkward at times because of her age. I totally know how that is and you portrayed it perfectly! I also liked the way you were able to transition back and forth between present and past so the story all fit together. Nice job!(:

oh my God. this is absolute, utter perfection that i most probably will never, ever get enough of. as of today, or maybe yesterday when i first read it, it's going to be my unofficial bedtime story.

I adored this. <33
I like the fact that they didn't have sex, because it showed that they didn't have to sleep together to show their feelings. =)
Perfect, I loved it.

awwww Krisha you already know that I love this. The ending was definitely worth waiting for, very sweet XD

xx

LOVE IT! way to start off a story! cant wait for the next one!:)

Oh lordy, that was hands-down amazing (:
All the sexual tension between them was enthralling. If that makes any sense. haha.
You wrote this so beautifully and I can basically picture everything that was occurring between them.
The flashbacks were lovely and all the feelings were nicely displayed. You are a very talented writer, my friend.
I think I fell for John O. all over again b/c of this<3

OH EM CHLOE GEE!

Me loved that oneshot. I actually thought that was going to get a little more than *ahem* um...well...you know...:XD

But I liked the fact it didn't. It shows you don't need that to show someone you love them. I like that. (Oh wow I hope that doesn't sound like I'm some overly religious RE teacher *thinks of mrs thompson*)

ANYWAY, good story. I absolutely loved it and I think I shall read it again now. Good bye my love. :cute:

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but really its SMOKIN'
ahaha OH and I've been told to thank you by Tannerz... for the Aelx update... haha so i'll do it here!!
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I LOVED IT!!!
thanks so much muffin darling X)
you really didn't have to dedicate it too me love
it was just a video honey bee.
anyways I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!
oh my your writing as prevailed and grown so much!
It was utterly and profoundly amazing and beautiful.
haha he is already in my heart ;)
love you, love this!
xo