Amen! - Comments

simply awesome. i think elves were a perfect addition to the story

whoa...lord of the rings deja vu lol loved it hun!

Great update!
My eyes are really bright blue just so you know
They don't seem to show in my Face Books pics but they do in my MySpace pics :tehe:

I loved this chapter
I love how you introduced my character to the boys :tehe:

MAN
THAT WAS FREGGIN EPIC XD
Loving It!
More Soon! Its Amazing!
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Oh yes, Abi action :tehe:
I so totally rock yeah :file:

"I can't let you die! I've yet to get a kiss from you!"

Awww! So cute!

aww i hope mikey and bob get together! tehehe cuteness!

OMG put lyn-z in XD make her go les for some one sister or addopted daughter lol idk random idea while reading last note. i know it no what you want but trying to help XD wanting that update lol

Ok chickita! here's what i think you should write! you ready for this! There HAS to be some hurt comfort AKA i've had enough of ferard so mikey while they are saving sime kids while testing out their new costumes should get hurt by a corrupted mob leader of a wolf pack ir something, and this should send him and Ray Ray, Gee Gee, and Fee Fee? lol (Frankie) into a rage fit but they can't let bobby go cause he's gotta comfort Mikey, and this is where Mikes is all i love and and bobs all like thank god! i love you too! then they should plan this big massive raid of the mob dueds pack, and find out that other bands on tour also have mythical power things, and while they are planning the mob guy is sending mythical things after them trying to to kill them but they never succed, and you can put in some Frank Gee comfort, AND! even more so Ray should fall in love with the Mobs guys daughter/son and turn them good and then i unno lol is that helpful? lol

Hmm Next Chapter...
Strokes None Existent Beard...
Hmmmm How About A Kind Of Fillerish Nicey One, Something To Do With The Background Of One Of Them Or Something, Maybe Just A Filler With Hints Of Bad Things That Are To Come?
I Really Have No Good Ideas But You've Just Had A Peak In Drama So The Most Logical Thing Is To Have A Few Fillers To Make The Next Peak In Drama Like SHOCK - HORROR. :L
My English Teacher Mr Jones Showed Us That ^ And It Really Works In Lulling The Readers Into A Really Likee 'Awwwwh' State Of Mind So The Next Big Chapter Proper Gets Them Like D: I LOVE IT! :L
I Use It A Lot In My Stories And It Tends To Work If You've Got Really Interested Readers.
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Hmmm. I'm gonna go all "early sunsets" on you, and heres my idea. So, you got Frank and Gee who get on real nice. Eventually, Gee picks up the guts to ask Frankie out on a date then later ask him out. It goes all swimingly for a little while, then Gerard goes out hunting, and accidently bites another vampire. And from there, thats when Early sunsets comes in, and Vampires come charging in to get Gerard back, and end up getting Frank because they know it will hurt Gerard more.

Pfff - just pair Ray up with me :file:
I'd read that shizzle...not that I have a crush on Ray at all...

frerard? does that count as an idea? *hopes but doesnt think so*

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Hellooo,
Last Tijme I Had No Inspiration Because Well A Certain Someone At School Was Really Getting To Me And I Had Nothing To Get My Imagination Going, It Only Works When I'm Happy.
But It's The Weekend Now ^.^ And I'm Away From Teh Jackass (:
So I Was Thinking If These Beings Are Evil How About Esponage?
Like Having One Of Them Disguised And The Group Trust Them And BAM That Being Gives Their Ideas To Get Around The Situation Away And They Are Stuck In A Fight ;] Having To Use Their On The Spot Improvisation To Save The Day? Or Something Like That. Betrayal Is So Good To Write And It Could Add A Little Mystery. Who Knows You Could Even Have The BVeing Feel Guilty And Fight On Their Side In The Very End Fight. I Hope This Helps You Out Or Was Along The Lines You Were Thinking If Not I'm Sorry For Wasting Your Time :L
Much Love
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Hey i'm sorry i haven't commented but i'm just kinda shy but i think you are doing abd awesome job with 'Amen' and you should keep going. As i read that you wanted ideas maybe, if you want, you could have the other/invading mythical creatures/people come into play and try to take over or some thing and Gerard and the gang would have to fight them off. You could even have Frank or Mikey get captured and taken hostage for some reason and they will have to be rescued. I took your word and read your other stories and I LOVED them! Keep up the GREAT work! :D

The other creatures should be baddies and and and andddd uh, ray should have a crush on one :)
thats all i can think of :P but its still an idea i guess

yeah sorry for not commenting, i was trying to think of ideas but i got nothin. i don't even have ideas for my own stories *pouts* sowwies!

I just checked me emails and got two updates for this...
I'd love to offer you some ideas but I have none
Maybe you could pair Ray off with someone...I dunno...

i think i dunno if you could do it but put a background in like tell how they all got to be like this and everything i dunno i just ramble :/

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make fucking more or i'll kill you!!!!

:O! my first death threat! *tears up* YAYYYYYY! okies, i'll make more. might be a few days tho.

-protects his GF and fav writer OxyG-