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  • mannaquin

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    THis si my judgement comment. This my frined was stellar. I loved the repetition, the feeling. the incorporation fo such emotions. Wonderful, there were some typos though.
    May 25th, 2009 at 05:35pm
  • xXGreyWingsXx

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    Which was the original colour?
    I'm intrigued. :cute:
    Lovely repetition of the one sentence.
    April 21st, 2009 at 10:52pm
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