Shall We Dance? - Comments

read both stories in a day =D heck yes! nice ending ;) all my theories went out the window once lyn-z left, im rubbish at them anyways xD xx

oh fuck, that was good! i really thought she had gotten pregant and was expecting that, but i wasn't expecting her to lie about it. how's that for karma, gerard?

excellent ending and i'm pumped for freak show!!

can't wait!

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haha three cheers for sweet revenge!!!
epic ending!

oh my god, that was so fucking epic!!!!
i loved the ending!!!! :D
that was seriously brilliant.

i don't think i was expecting that. and neither did emily. wow, i hope it's not another mind fuck game...

lol and you say "really not"? we say "not really" hahaha i think that's funny.

more soon, i can't wait to see how this wraps up :)

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holy shitttttt
that was epic.

holy shit she pregnant isn't she?
you just gotta feel sorry for her

hmmm interesting. well, with all the sex those two were having it's amazing that she didn't realize it before.

oh my god, imagine the look on gerard's face if she told him. sure, everyone else would be pissed at her but it would serve him right. told you payback's a bitch :p

more soon!

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Holy crap! She's pregnant!
If i was her, i'd get a sexy boyfriend that had simliar traits to Gerard, have sex with him and make him think it was his. Cruel, yes, but what other options do you have?

i'm eager to see just how Gerard will pay
update soon? :)

she should've talked to frank sooner! she's dumb for only listening to gerard, but she's right, love is blind. and how can you say no to gerard way?

buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut he's gonna get what's coming to him. watch out gerard!

more soon!

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woah, that's really messed up. DX

damn, that sucks. Emily shouldn't have been that naive though.

oooh gerard you sneaky bastard. i didn't think lyn-z would actually know. this is why you must listen to frank!

and how isn't this the end? unless she kills gerard...but then that would break up the band and she's not psycho crazy like that.

can't wait to see how this all wraps up!

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Gerard is an asshole!!!!!
but then so is LynZ:(
poor emily

i really wanna know what frank was going to say. he needs to finish so she can be even more conflicted and confused. maybe if he sent her a voicemail or something from a random number, just in case she doesn't want to talk to him again.

and i can't believe that she's willing to be so complient with him. he's like "go wait for me while i finish with my wife". i would definitely not be sharing hahah :p

can't wait for more!!

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What was frank about to say!?!?!?!

her mind's going now. she's doesn't know whom to trust. i think frank should somehow say what he needs via like a letter or a voicemail or something. i'm too curious myself lol.

can't wait for more!!

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i think we should hear what frank has to say. i'm really curious.

can't wait for more!!

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wow, the baby so fast? oh well, wanna see how gerard handles his time with emily now that he's gonna be a daddy.

more soon!!

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