Wow I just read all of that and it's pretty good. I like how you set the whole situation up and how it doesn't just start being all happy and everything is perfect tralalala. Great stuff =] Too bad it's ending soon; but, I'm looking forward to some more!
Finally, he admitted his true feelings! And, yeah, it wasn't the brightest idea to tell her that part of the reason he was there was because he might be benched, haha!
You know I loved it, and I can't wait to see how you end it all!
Awww, now you've got me feeling bad for Jon! Seriously, he needs to do something big to get Tianna to forgive him, and then they need to get back together!
And, Tianna's mom is still a bitch, and Tianna needs to get out of that house. Go somewhere...anywhere...back with Jon, haha!
WTF. Tim? This Tim guy better disappear, SOON. But first he should kick the shit out of Jon for treating Tianna like shit. Then Jon and Tianna can get back together =]