Lyrical Love Letter - Comments

Aw, I'm quite sad to see that this was never finished.
Hm... it's been three years since you last updated too, so it's looking doubtful that it will be.
But, I just wanted to leave a comment letting you know I will be here if you choose to finish it. If you find the inspiration again, but I can understand losing it or life just getting in the way.
This story was kind of aggravating but I love it at the same time. Very emotional. Very detailed. You're a very good writer.
Tbh, Jonnie's character kind of makes me angry. She just kind of wandered in and I can't help but think if she never showed up, all of those tragic events wouldn't have happened. Them rebelling and getting in trouble, the death in the story...
But, I guess that's life right? It's unpredictable and you can't really control who arrives. Although Jonnie kind of takes everything she has for granted which also annoys me.
lol I'm just kind of venting here. There's nothing you can really do to change that aspect of the story now, unless you chose to rewrote it, but yeah, just saying.
Your story is very successful on the popularity front so I can't really give much criticism I guess. Not that I can really find much to note about because you did do a fabulous job on this story.
Although I did find there were a lot of filler chapters. I pushed through them but that was a bit difficult at times.
But other than that happening, great job! I will be here if you ever one day come back to this and decide to write for it again. You at least have one reader.

Can you please finish this?! I'm so addicted to this story line! I'm dying to know the ending. Please update!

so i know you wrote this forever ago but i really loved it and i wish there was more

I'm still reading.
Definitely cried at this chapter.

♥

really well written.
update soon (:

Omg you finally updated! :DDD

just read all 60 some chapters. more, please?

So I've been reading this on and off and I finished it a while ago but never left you a comment and I feel like procrastinating right now. So before I continue to ramble I have to say, I'm in LOVE with this story!!!!! So much so that you don't even understand!!! First off I want to say I can't believe Declan's and Julliette's mother just left them at the Dawson house, but I'm glad she did because now she has Alex. I just love them together, the bickering is too cute! Especially because it doesn't change anything between them! And the twists and turns of this story! Holy shit! This story line is so intricate that it boggles my mind! I love it soooo much that I can't even explain. I really, really, really, really don't want Julliette, Declan and Jonnie to leave, at all!
Also, I love your writing style! It's beyond amazing and I just love it! It's all so detailed but not so much that it bores you, it's all so interesting and I can really relate to the characters. Like I know how they feel. The last few chapters, I could practically taste their sorrow, their pain, all of it!
Also, I was being a creeper, well kinda, and figured out that Louis Posen is the founder of Hopeless Records.....and he's Jonnie's dad, right? So I'm seeing so more intricacy with All Time Low in the future, am I right? Cause I kinda figured that he has SOMETHING to do with music, just not that he founded Hopeless. I was looking at Hopeless's wikipedia page (don't ask me why because I don't even know) and I thought of this story and than it just hit me! So I love this story sooooo much and I think you should update soon! I will leave you with that so I don't continue to ramble, lol.

Ahhhh this is so good!!!
Update soon!!!

THAT IS AMAZING!
You better not make her leave alex! i will cry for like ever!

I was so happy when I saw you updated!! :)
It was a great update..
I'm glad Alex was there for Juliette when she needed it most. I love them together :)
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
<3 Kelsey

So I freaking LOVE this story!!!
Your writing is unbelievable. :)
And I would love a sequel!!!!!!!!
I can't wait for another update!!
I'm so happy Declan, Juliette and Jonnie stood up her so called father...he deserved it!!
Update soon!!!
<3 Kelsey

I inddeed am still readingg(:
I like the conversation between the heart and the head. *creative*
Well, whenever you can update, it would be much, much, much, much, much, oh-so-very appreciated.(: ahah.
Still love the story<3

HURRAY.
I wish there was more to it but still. Zack and Jonnie! XD

My next couple is Jack and Missy of course. So that was like a double for me.

I'm happy now.

GAH, I'M SO SORRY. I HAVEN'T READ ANY MIBBA STUFF FOR AWHILE AND EVERY TIME I THINK ABOUT THIS STORY, I'M SCARED THERE WERE LIKE FIFTY CHAPTERS I NEVER READ.

But it turns out there was about three I think. Which I read. And loved. :)

I really love the drama in this. You are amazing.

PS: Update soon. I wanna know what happens.

PPS: I like Jonnie and Zack couple. :) My fave at the moment. XD

I absolutly love this! Update soon?

this story is superawesome! Please update soon i'm dying to know what happens next!!

SO... I love the story. I'm falling more in love with Alex... but I have to ask... what happened to Declan and Melanie dating... and the cheering thing?

This story is also pretty good =) You're a great writer.